Item: Roy Mustang Template in Harry Potter
Rating: 1
Author: CliffkunLolRekt

CliffkunLolRektLv66mth

2024-06-18 15:37

Chapter 18 officially killed the story have fun with your worm of a mc author

Roy Mustang Template in Harry Potter

Tomas_Vega_2683

3.2

29 Chs

Liked by 32 people

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krokrok007Lv4

why turn the MC into masochist and give Neo the system and even making her version stronger than his

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Other Reviews

WaveringMoonLv15

the concept was a good idea, but this is very clearly a wish fulfillment fantasy that ignores almost everything in harry potter. also the book is half filled with constant walls of text of system stats. the book is also extremely fast paced to the point where it's missing a lot of details.

5mth

F0cusLv4

Well since the only chapter is a info dump and the concept is quite liking to my taste , i am looking forward to this and waiting for author to put some chapters

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Noble_K1ngLv4

So far I like it, the MC isn’t naive and stupid and if it stays like this the story’s gon be a W

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Swan_ReaderLv13

I loved your work Nice character design. I think you should increase the word count of each chapter. update more, good read so far. More chapters needed

7mth

sean_goinsLv15

very good so far hope for updates more and good character building so far

9mth

jonkitLv4

I see the vision, but the translation is pretty bad, not the worst on this platform, but still bad. Because of that it constantly switches perspective: "Roy chooses >skill< and because of that I do more damage" even though it's about the same person. so overall: nice premise but translation (?) ruins it, only read if you can stand bad translations

5mth

RakLv5

it start good but now randomly going anywhere you guys give it a try................................................................................

5mth

DaoistglM5nfLv1

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Thomsonandrew5235Lv14

I really enjoy it but it needs to be updated more often to be up there with my favourites

6mth

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