Writing quality: It's decent. I am not a native English speaker, so I don't know if it's up to par for people with high standards. Story development: Well, as the author said, the plot isn't serious, so for those hoping to read serious stuff, it's not the place for you. Character Design: It could have been a lot better if he weren't overpowered from the start. Though I can expect some character development, right? Updating stability: 5 stars, no questions asked. World Background: 5 stars because I see potential, and adding KNB in Food Wars is just the pushy on top. This fanfiction is good for passing the time, and I know some people may not like it, but do your best, Breadtoast.

A multiverse fanfic that has only a female lead, why? Dont know, the author probably has feelings for this character and thinks that having the mc having a harem is cheating on her. Bland characters that like the author said, its just there to flock around the mc and nothing more, which is annoying since it doesn't make any sense doing a multiversal one where is fl and putting a lot of women after mc when he is going only for one.

Eh... It's alright, not the worst thing but nothing particularly good either. It's your typical "lMC can do everything, side-characters are all blank npcs, system crutch that breaks any semblance of stakes. The writing quality is decent though.

It's going well. If there's romance, Erina.++++[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

Regular reader here! I'm sure you'll do justice to Food Wars! I'm here only for that after all. Make sure to finish this as well please!

It was normal until the basketball-related events started. Now, I try to skip everything related to it, since it's not interesting at all. . . .

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idk how to feel about this fanfic. It's good, but imo it's kinda embarrassing to read when mc using msg in his cooking, it's like reading a meme.

Seems like you've changed the way you write your earlier chapters again this time. Honestly, this is the best among your other works! I love how you immediately get straight to business to the canon that I want to read!

meh