Writing quality: It's decent. I am not a native English speaker, so I don't know if it's up to par for people with high standards. Story development: Well, as the author said, the plot isn't serious, so for those hoping to read serious stuff, it's not the place for you. Character Design: It could have been a lot better if he weren't overpowered from the start. Though I can expect some character development, right? Updating stability: 5 stars, no questions asked. World Background: 5 stars because I see potential, and adding KNB in Food Wars is just the pushy on top. This fanfiction is good for passing the time, and I know some people may not like it, but do your best, Breadtoast.
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who's the love interest?
Harem👀❓
the real question, harem or not, I consider rolling in bed together as an official relationship so if he roll with a single girl but other girl still eyes him it's a single relationship and if he doesn't roll with anyone and it's interest as best, it's having no relationship
Is this a harem? It wouldn’t make since to have mu,tiveral travel and not have a harem Specially in worlds with so many good waifus like food wars would just be really disappointing if he doesnt get a harem
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Anitimesc:Is this a harem? It wouldn’t make since to have mu,tiveral travel and not have a harem Specially in worlds with so many good waifus like food wars would just be really disappointing if he doesnt get a harem
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And is it harem ?
Anitimesc:Is this a harem? It wouldn’t make since to have mu,tiveral travel and not have a harem Specially in worlds with so many good waifus like food wars would just be really disappointing if he doesnt get a harem
Are u serious this is 1 star for character design.
And no he is weak
Added KNB made it a 1 star world development you shouldve left that out and focused on the whole cookibg concept and different world missions instead. 1 star for character design I said enough in my review about why it is 1 star Updates I 1 star because of the inability to update the character descriptions Story development 1 star also because it has me being face-lift except for characters I already know. Hopefully you fix the issue of characters only being described by hair colour.
