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DreamsNeverDie
DreamsNeverDieLv159mth
2024-03-04 20:03

Pretty good book.

Legacy of Harry Potter

Graviele
4.4
156 Chs

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Graviele
GravieleAuthor

Author here.. I have had some comments about short chapters and few comments even calling my writing trash.. as it appeared to them that I have forcefully placed monologue in chapter. I want to clarify: 1. Every chapter I post will be around 1k words. I am not a professional writer and I do it for fun and enjoyment. 2. I tend to let the story progress at a moderate pace. I don't fill up with monologues. If wanted this check the auxiliary chapter.. I could have literally used that much information to add atleast 3 chapters... used those knowledge to fulfill conversation.. I could have had a goblin recite all that information. 3. This is the style I will be following.

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SaintPiccolo
SaintPiccoloLv1

Nothing changes 74 chapters for nothing. In another story, he solved everything in almost 30 episodes. Why are you dragging it out so much? Harry Potter was too aggressive with the four children. Honestly, in the original story, I would put all the teachers in Azkaban because none of them are sane. Dumbledore is irritating in every way. Even more so here.

5mth
Storm2023
Storm2023Lv4

So far the story is very interesting and unique, quite a bit of the aspects in this are things I haven’t seen people do in a ho fic and they are compelling to read. Keep up the phenomenal work.🙏

9mth
Jon_0094
Jon_0094Lv13

This is currently my favorite HP fanfiction I have found. so far it look like it's going to be very involved in the Wizarding world politics which I haven't seen done.

8mth
Laziness_IsThe_Key
Laziness_IsThe_KeyLv5

Reveal spoiler

8mth
unrankedKing
unrankedKingLv4

keep it up this story is getting good can't wait for the next upload

9mth
Dcreversal
DcreversalLv15

The setting is good, the back story of peveralls was short and sweet. Looking forward to the next part of the story

8mth
Graviele
GravieleAuthor

Author here. Give the story a try and leave a review.

9mth
Ficmastery
FicmasteryLv4

The story starts from a somewhat dubious but interesting premise, and develops in a very satisfying way, with Harry no longer being a guided and stupid character to taking on the real protagonist in the magical world, maintaining the necessary caution to survive and discover who They are his enemies and who he can trust.

8mth
RynMcNuts
RynMcNutsLv14

I think this story is quite good, but to really rate this story, it's actually to soon. I think it has good potential. now we just need to see how it goes

9mth
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