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2024-05-09 20:47

Finally, another novel with a very good story is again on this platform with a very good story plot with a very good balance between slow and fast development has been found and of course the usual behavior of this platform makes this kind of novels somewhat buried and very difficult to be found.

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UBI_Master
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To be fair. half of the reader here are degenerate brainrot. unless your story have over 500 chapter, good luck fighting the algorithms.

WhOaMI
WhOaMILv14

I changed my mind, this novel is very slow paced and the MC rarely takes any action and is very passive, I mean the MC in this novel as a whole does very little meaningful things, in fact the side characters are more prominent than the MC, I guess I expected a lot too, but I hope there are some changes in the future

NeroCladius
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I actually like that other characters get more attention, the Mc is OP, he's like a Gojo for this story. He'll easily solve most of everything. And it's always nice to have a novel where side characters are actually given attention.

WhOaMI:I changed my mind, this novel is very slow paced and the MC rarely takes any action and is very passive, I mean the MC in this novel as a whole does very little meaningful things, in fact the side characters are more prominent than the MC, I guess I expected a lot too, but I hope there are some changes in the future
PocketCat2
PocketCat2Author

I'll take this into account, didn't want the side characters to just seem bland so I focused too much on them. But I'll take attention back to Mikoto

WhOaMI:I changed my mind, this novel is very slow paced and the MC rarely takes any action and is very passive, I mean the MC in this novel as a whole does very little meaningful things, in fact the side characters are more prominent than the MC, I guess I expected a lot too, but I hope there are some changes in the future
WhOaMI
WhOaMILv14

Thank you for listening to my Complaint, and I see you are already actively making some changes in the recent chapter. You're the best

PocketCat2:I'll take this into account, didn't want the side characters to just seem bland so I focused too much on them. But I'll take attention back to Mikoto
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