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rbpLv21yr
2024-03-31 19:03

it was engaging at first, but seems like he will be someone's lackey till the end or for a long time, that cause's my boredom, as it was not my type of story. hais,, my bad, for expecting something else as the author was true to his books title. big respect though,, as the book was written really well, no typos and was made logically, i'm sure it will be engaging for those who doesn't care or who like the mc being a lackey.

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AbiLIon
AbiLIonAuthor

Thank you for your reading!!

Monarch_Lord
Monarch_LordLv3

thanks for the save

Jefferson_Ben
Jefferson_BenLv4

on god

Chibba
ChibbaLv5

oof, thanks for the warning

The_True_KING_
The_True_KING_Lv13

I really don't think you should spread this misinformation just by reading 18-20 chaps not even knowing what's going to happen... right now mc is op as one can get.. ant it's not just now he shows his op-ness from chap 100, so please don't spread this misinformation 🙏🏻

The_True_KING_
The_True_KING_Lv13

I don't think you should just believe someone who didn't even read upto 20 chaps... anyway if you are still interested in the novel, you can check out my review, it's pinned

Monarch_Lord:thanks for the save
The_True_KING_
The_True_KING_Lv13

I don't think someone who didn't even read 20chaps can give any meaningful review except blabbering.. anyway if you are still interested in the novel, you can check out my review, it's pinned

Jefferson_Ben:on god
The_True_KING_
The_True_KING_Lv13

I don't think you should believe someone who just made a review after reading 18chaps.... anyway if you are still interested in the novel, you can check out my review, it's pinned

Chibba:oof, thanks for the warning
Heaven_emper0r
Heaven_emper0rLv2

you have just read 18 chapters. What did you expect in just 18 chapters from MC? To kill all emperors and all villains and then complete this novel. Sorry to say this, but this is not your typical bookmark reading novels. It has character development, power building, world development, secrets of the world, humor, romance, seducing, manipulation etc. It has all. How did you expect to see all these tags in just 18 chapters and judge the novel. It's like immediately after you have born you have established a company like Amazon, Google, Tesla and made profits in trillions US dollars. So, read upto 100-150 chapters and come again.

Azrael_DAngel
Azrael_DAngelLv14

don't believe that bs bruh, you really think i would read something where mc is slave to some other guy. he is thrashing his master from start, lackey in name just🤣🤣🤣

Monarch_Lord:thanks for the save
Chibba
ChibbaLv5

so I tried and read to chapter 29, and the MC can even be ordered around magically. I don't believe many readers want to read about a slave MC. People rebel about any kind of captivity immediately in the comments.

The_True_KING_:I don't think you should believe someone who just made a review after reading 18chaps.... anyway if you are still interested in the novel, you can check out my review, it's pinned
The_True_KING_
The_True_KING_Lv13

as I have already said in my review which you have not read should check it out, but yh the first 40 chaps are the most gruelling chaps and if you can go beyond that you will notice that the ordering around is going down until chap 100 from where there's no being pushed around rather it's aether who will push everyone and thrashed everyone from that chap.. you can read from chap 100-110 if you need confirmation.. but i want you to ask something, you don't think that a novel which is only about being pushed around would get 1k+ PS and top 100 GTs ranking right??

Chibba:so I tried and read to chapter 29, and the MC can even be ordered around magically. I don't believe many readers want to read about a slave MC. People rebel about any kind of captivity immediately in the comments.
Chibba
ChibbaLv5

well I am not sure, the world is becoming increasingly strange and there is also a precedent with Shadow Slave, so I was not entirely sure.

The_True_KING_:as I have already said in my review which you have not read should check it out, but yh the first 40 chaps are the most gruelling chaps and if you can go beyond that you will notice that the ordering around is going down until chap 100 from where there's no being pushed around rather it's aether who will push everyone and thrashed everyone from that chap.. you can read from chap 100-110 if you need confirmation.. but i want you to ask something, you don't think that a novel which is only about being pushed around would get 1k+ PS and top 100 GTs ranking right??
The_True_KING_
The_True_KING_Lv13

hmm i will only say there's no ordering from chap 100, he gets a skill that temporarily removes his slave seal around chap 100+ can't remember chap no. , and he gets read of his slave seal completely around chap 730+, and that he's hella op, now if you want or don't want to continue the novel is completely your choice

Chibba:well I am not sure, the world is becoming increasingly strange and there is also a precedent with Shadow Slave, so I was not entirely sure.
Chibba
ChibbaLv5

I am continuing, don't have many other options currently anyways. He now put some points into Int and I really hope he can become a mage or at least use magic, I am curious if he can put points into Affinity but it is listed under attributes so it should be possible.

The_True_KING_:hmm i will only say there's no ordering from chap 100, he gets a skill that temporarily removes his slave seal around chap 100+ can't remember chap no. , and he gets read of his slave seal completely around chap 730+, and that he's hella op, now if you want or don't want to continue the novel is completely your choice
Asura0047
Asura0047Lv4

Bro atleast read the book then complain 😞 because of you guys this masterpiece isnt that popular you have problems with mc being lackey of other i did the same but i just waited a lil and boom i got surprised thanks god I didn’t dropped it otherwise i would have missed a good book

Asura0047
Asura0047Lv4

Bro just read as lang as he gets in academy you would see a devil in him

Chibba:I am continuing, don't have many other options currently anyways. He now put some points into Int and I really hope he can become a mage or at least use magic, I am curious if he can put points into Affinity but it is listed under attributes so it should be possible.
Asura0047
Asura0047Lv4

Dont miss it out bro i have met you on many novel and believe me this is the novel you wont want to miss out just because someone said the mc is a slave heck He is just a slave in name but he gets all of the girls of his master except one ☠️ lol she really made the mc’s master gae 🫡 lol she is the second main protagonist 😂😂

Monarch_Lord:thanks for the save
Monarch_Lord
Monarch_LordLv3

ooh- alright, I'll give it a try then

Asura0047:Dont miss it out bro i have met you on many novel and believe me this is the novel you wont want to miss out just because someone said the mc is a slave heck He is just a slave in name but he gets all of the girls of his master except one ☠️ lol she really made the mc’s master gae 🫡 lol she is the second main protagonist 😂😂
PRAW_NC
PRAW_NCLv10

A brilliant piece of advice, I applaud you standing up! So, if you don’t like the book after the first twenty chapters, you’re supposed to force yourself to keep reading? The first chapters are really awful, and if you didn’t like them, there’s no need to torture yourself and continue reading this trash.

The_True_KING_:I really don't think you should spread this misinformation just by reading 18-20 chaps not even knowing what's going to happen... right now mc is op as one can get.. ant it's not just now he shows his op-ness from chap 100, so please don't spread this misinformation 🙏🏻
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The_True_KING_
The_True_KING_Lv13

One of the best novels I have read so far and i just saw it never had a proper review explaining everything so here I am doing the grueling task xD... --- Writing Quality (10/10) The writing quality in this novel is exceptional, with a bit of mystery blending in. The novel is immersive making the reading experience smooth and enjoyable. The author demonstrates the skill of a veteran writer even though this is his 2nd novel. The pacing is natural, and it has me completely hooked. I would even compare it some of the most famous and read novels present in wn. --- World-Building (10/10) The novel starts in Earth and then comes to a world or if that's what you would call it as it is 5 massive pieces of flat land which are 5 different empires all with different composition, geography and many other things, being held up by massive roots whose origins or end point isn't revealed still at the point.. There are illustration of the world in the discord and also posted in the relevant chaps so you can check there for a clear image.. Anyway there are some gods and higher beings introduced who are playing a dangerous game with many things on the line.. --- Power System (9/10) The power system here is a unique system by upgrading some present power systems and also adding some new pieces. Aether the protagonist, possesses a broken bloodline that even the Gods and higher beings fears and also has a log/system who's origins are revealed in parts as we go on with the story. And i would say this here the mc is as op as one can get that no one in the world can fight him and the gods and their people has to come to fight the mc. There are also some gods who are in support of him.. --- Character Development (10/10) Aether is one of the best MC I have ever read, he is smart and also knows how to use his head. And if someone only reads novels for wish fulfilment and likes mc's who never faces a little bit of difficulty this definitely not for them because there will be ups and downs, highs and lows that the MC will go through. The MC starts of as a slave and is treated a bit poorly for the starting chaps but you can already see himself picking himself up from around 40 chaps and he also b*ats the sh*t out of the boy who is his master and all other who treated him badly in 100-110 chaps(remember he beats his master even though he is under his slave mark.. It should tell you how much OP he is to break even the universal laws and contracts built by gods)... And he has also already taken his revenge on the main culprit behind his slavery... And I also want to say that if he was really a slave and could be pushed around, this novel won't have this many supporters who gives ps and gt.. No reader's will waste their coins, GT and PS on a novel who's mc is just a slave and nothing more.. --- Romance (10/10) Reading the title one might think this is a sm*t novel and that he will pick up FLs left and right but it isn't like that.. The way author potrays the romance is just... Just fantastic... Every single FL present is relevant to the story and plot and there have been only 6-7 r18 scenes until latest chap so you can understand how much detail is put into every relationship. --- Update Stability (10/10) The author has great updating schedule with sometimes even releasing 2 chaps a day, hope he makes it 10 chaps a day lol.. Jokes aside he has great updating schedule and doesn't miss out a day on updates and he also gives bonuses when certain requirements are fulfilled.. --- Overall Impression (9.5/10) So to sum it up this novel is a complete gem of a novel you don't want to miss out on.. P. S. :- I forgot to mention this but there are no plot holes in the novel which are prone to some op mc novels.. And if you have reached the end of this review I hope you will definitely give this novel a try and help us in making it even more popular than it already is... And if you read it and also come to like it do share it with your known novel enthusiasts and friends This is definitely a must-read for fans of reincarnation, fantasy, sword&magic and mystery stories. So give it a chance guys I am certain you definitely like it.. If you have any questions regarding the novel you can ask them.. I will try to ans them to the best of my ability... or you can also ask the author in the comments or in discord I have never seen him not reply to a question from any of his readers.. Thanks for reading this lengthy review lol ---

AbiLIon
AbiLIonAuthor

🎉 Hey everyone! 🎉 It’s been ONE WHOLE YEAR since my novel was released, and wow, what a ride it’s been! I just wanted to come here and share my honest thoughts with you all—though I’ll admit, it might be a tiny bit biased 😉. Cough, Cough Anyway, Now, I’m not the greatest at making first impressions (let’s be real here 😅), and yes, the beginning of my novel can feel a little slow. It might even seem a bit boring at first, but trust me, don’t close it just yet!! 🚫 Once you get past that slow start, the thrills, twists, and curiosity will kick in HARD! 😱🔥 My novel is a slow burn, but that’s what makes it exciting! (Lots of emotions to be honest) Sure, it’s a bit like waiting for a spark to turn into a full-on blaze, but trust me—the payoff is so worth it! 🙌 I’ve seen reviews saying the MC starts off as a "slave" and a "pushover," and, well... yes, he kinda does... 😬 BUT WAIT—don’t close the book just yet! By chapter 100, things get WILD, and you’ll see how much he evolves into something so much more! He’s not a pushover—he’s a character on the rise, and you’re going to LOVE the transformation! 😏💥 Yes, there are a few sad moments, but don’t worry—I’m an author who loves my characters, and I would NEVER leave them in constant despair! 🌈 The sad moments are just temporary and trust me, it all turns around for the better! 💖 And let’s talk about the female leads! 😍❤️ ... all I can say... They’re incredible, and I’m sure you’re going to fall in love with them, even if it takes a little time! (But let’s be real, you’ll love them soon enough 😉). They’re complex, strong, and definitely bring the heat! 🔥🔥 Oh, and did I mention? There are YANDERES!!! 😈💘 Get ready for some seriously intense, crazy moments that’ll keep you on the edge of your seat! Buckle up, because the drama is REAL! 🚨💣 Thank you all for sticking with me on this journey! 🚀 I can’t wait to see where we go next—you won’t want to miss what’s coming! So grab your phone/laptop/whatever 😋, sit back, and enjoy the ride with me! 🙌✨

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