Review Detail of LittleRedsWolf in Mass Effect SI - The Afterlife

The MC is an interesting concept. It can be executed well with some work. The author needs to walk that line between manic and being a likable and well fleshed out character. From some of the stories I've read, a fully manic/mentally broken MC without any character growth, development, or positive changes tends to drive off some readers. The first few chapters are rough. Chapter 6 is much better. The author shows improvement as they write. I am looking forward to more chapters to update my review again.