Cheers to aiming high, my friends! I sincerely believe this story to be better than my last and I hope it's something that you, the readers, find joy in consuming. It won't be perfect, but it's my current best. And don't be afraid to leave suggestions! I read more than I write after all! :D
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LIKECain is forgetful and indifferent to the lives of man, having experienced the fall of society once before — he feels no connection to the lives and remnants of Earth. Born again, he lacks a sense of purpose and is acting purely off of distorted morals and a feeling that he “should” be doing something. Olive, on the other hand, is the catalyst. Abandoned by her world and people, abused and taken advantage of, seen as no more than a commodity — Olive fuels spite and hatred. Tranquil calm and burning rage. One with a purpose and one without — yet bound as one. Cursed in different ways, they seek refuge from fate.
JBFIRE_77:describe the MC, is he selfish, greedy, do anything to achieve his goal, etc.
so.... the MC have to a connection with olive to have purpose to move on and live?
TheLostBoy:Cain is forgetful and indifferent to the lives of man, having experienced the fall of society once before — he feels no connection to the lives and remnants of Earth. Born again, he lacks a sense of purpose and is acting purely off of distorted morals and a feeling that he “should” be doing something. Olive, on the other hand, is the catalyst. Abandoned by her world and people, abused and taken advantage of, seen as no more than a commodity — Olive fuels spite and hatred. Tranquil calm and burning rage. One with a purpose and one without — yet bound as one. Cursed in different ways, they seek refuge from fate.