Review Detail of 3PoundsOfRice in Reverend Insanity-Blood Venerable Ascension

There are some minor flaws, I feel like you don't follow a thread, but when you come up with something you just use a totally rushed flashback to justify it. Which takes away a lot from the quality of the storytelling. Other than that, you don't do too badly. The story is somewhat innovative and readable. Mc is not a nasty person his development goes well. Although it would be nice if you explained his improvement a bit more. Thanks for the chapters. I sincerely hope you kill his fiancée. I didn't see anything wrong with him at first, but their relationship started to look very forced, very much so.