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2024-04-08 03:54

The problem with this novel is the lack of tension. A lot of things happen in a short amount of time. The main character gets really strong for someone who just started his journey compared to Fang Yuan in the early arcs of the original novel. While Fang Yuan used any Gu he could get, this guy creates his own without experience. This novel has some good ideas but it needs a rewrite.

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_Rex
_RexLv4

Well he has A grade talent while fy had C so what do you expect Even in original it is explained with bai ning bing how easy it is for those with talents With knowledge about FY journey if he doesnt get atleast this strong it would be a bummer

SimpleReaderPassin
SimpleReaderPassinLv4

that doesn't have anything to do with him being able to create Gu🫀. So what if FY has C grade at the start and he has A? It doesn't have anything to do with being able to create Gu from text

_Rex:Well he has A grade talent while fy had C so what do you expect Even in original it is explained with bai ning bing how easy it is for those with talents With knowledge about FY journey if he doesnt get atleast this strong it would be a bummer
Lucius_DeAth
Lucius_DeAthLv1

I agree with you, the essence of "Reverend Insanity" is perseverance, not instant power ups!

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