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Maybe cause i read your overview n overall idea at the end before reviewing, it showed me in ch1

Keep up good work I will be waiting for yo new one So many ri fanfics with lotta potential have stopped recently which is really sad

I read till ch 8 but sure

I will be bluntly honest but while the idea is great the execution is all over the place Its js total chaos and even the characters themselves font act like themselves from og story, they seem greatly exaggerated And your idea to combine multiple worlds n mc seems good in theory but trying to edit and compare power will undoubtedly spark lotta dissatisfaction All in all not my cup of tea as the story seem all over the place

7 chaps so far will read if it ever reaches 30 chs before u give up like most lol

I Reread all that jst to learn its dropped Sed Shouldve mentioned in the start its dropped Came from the original novel where u yold u were rewriting it with few changes in idea n was soo excited

Oh Is it the info about akatsuki collecting tailed beasts?

Might as well reread from start Lets dig in

I suggest the new ninja that gained fame few chapters ago that uses lightning style and created massacre in kumogakure as new akatsuki member Sounds like a solid member Noone can convince me a better alternate

Fujin has mastered Dao of brainwashing