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Hydra_Gairum
Hydra_GairumLv31yr
2024-03-01 18:27

The synopsis is very well written, amazing story play, I think the author is good with his fingers (Get the pun), Exhilarating experience imo. The author has done the work and put out its effort. I wouldn't say best in the field but one of a kind out there. If this work continues, definitely it would the hit the pinnacle. Altho I advice the author to change the cover to something more attractive for more reach.....

Fall of a King, Rise of a Villain

itoade
5.0
103 Chs

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itoade
itoadeAuthor

Thank you so much! I completely understand what you mean about the cover but I’m not fully sure how to make covers 😭 Thank you so much either way!

1yr
Hydra_Gairum
Hydra_GairumLv3

You don't hv to make them manually. Go to any AI image converter, give the specifications n u hv ur cover. Or just visit pintrest. If ur using pintrest covers, make sure to give them credit and remove it if they want.....

itoade:Thank you so much! I completely understand what you mean about the cover but I’m not fully sure how to make covers 😭 Thank you so much either way!
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