Hydra_Gairum

Author, I want u to read this and properly read this. Firstly ur perception of what a hero is gone. Saving a person doesn't mean he is a hero. You save them because they're in danger let alone and adult or a child. Secondly using the so called skills of the mc increases the chances of even the kid lily dying from the collar bursting it was stupid, unpragramatic. If u wanted to introduce such a segment you shldve done it when he was stronger or with more allies. Pls note that there is no person who can survive being alone, the concept of lone wolf doesn't exist. Be it in a book or in life. And yes, WT U JUST WROTE IS NOT A GOOD OF PIECE OF ART BUT A BAD NONCHALANT WRITING. Ik my reviews r strict and I'm only giving u this bcoz ur novel has good potential. Never write such a chapter again. Think before u put in ur art and creativity.....

It would be better if the author can cut down the method of revenge, Ren's character development has been very good until now. Wasting away a good written character for some biased view called revenge is such a waste. After all he doesn't need revenge, it was his own fault, a pragmatic protagonist is always liked by the media compared to smn who is arrogant n cocky wo the oblivious reasons

Pls don't make the MC op.

Author a point to be noted: The story is quite interesting but you are dragging certain slice of life chapters a lot. Like the previous one. Wasting one whole chapter on just explaining the room and stuff is not commendable. I would recommend you to split up your paras more and shorten the neighborhood for the plot pace to pick up.

Hey author, can youmake the chapters a bit more lengthy?, the story is very good but is held back by how small the length is.

excellent story and good concept but does it have any kind of romance

" Unless you Know what the numbers mean you can't really do anything with them" - Entrail_JI That was a bit funny pardon me 🤣🤣.

Bruh whats with the power scale?? I wanted to ask this for a long time but how was he level 19 and still without any spells at the start of the series. And if his rate of progression is quite fast then why did it take him soo long to learn the spell??

What If Julien uses the strings as his defense, (bcoz he said he lacks em) you know like how John Smith (eminence from shadow) used to fight against Alpha.... Idk just my opinion but thought it'd be cool, what do u think author??

We shld get more of Leon and Julien moments, it's kinda like reading best frnds quarrel 🤣