Hydra_Gairum

One of a kind novels I've ever read and this is good. it's been a while since I've been this hooked, the only thing that's a bit upsetting is the literature. The author lacks emotions in the sentences he writes. Every paragraph feels monotonous, there's no depth, no character immersion, feels like reading laminar flow tbf. I wish the author would correct this and make the panels more expressive and vibrant. This story is a gem, don't let it down by poor literature

Heyy guys author here... This is novel is rewritten more precisely and better. So yes this is one such novels where you can expect mystery action and there is a lot twists and turns in here. Follow the life of our Mc as he figures out his place in this world and navigates through life filled with magic and monsters....

Ok guys. This is my second review. Just wanted to let you guys know, a while back I had written this book and yes it was slow and sloppy but now I'm grown up and my language improved by a drastic change like massive change and right now there won't be much of mistakes or the plot won't be as slow like before. Give it a try, and drop your comments down below.

Excellent story, extremely potent story and compelling story line. The wordings looks decent and most of all I like the introduction of a new power like a Rune. Most novels go on about the same Mana and magic bs. I have one doubt author maybe two- You seemed to be teasing a interlocked fate type of a thing with Ray and the world's protagonist, but i just hope u don't end up making those two enemies. I mean u can't just survive alone, you need allies. Hope iu can help me clear that up. Secondly will MC end up with Elysia or will even Mellisia also be included making two girls cause i don't want shit to become like The Novels Extra.

Who hurt the author man... Jesus broo calm down my boii. Humans are social creatures, we NEED people to survive ....

Woow, let the future me worry!! Oh come on author. You just contradicted your own statement like bruh, didn't you say people who don't use "future knowledge" to earn are idiots. Really bruh, you couldve written anything, you and u wrote this :/

I mean idk man, the character intro says stuff like ayanakoji, Aizen and what not and the mc is nowhere near those descriptions. Act 1 was very pathetic, if he truly was pragmatic like the author said he wouldn't have done what he did. The mc is smart yes, but not manipulative so it's a false alarm. He's smart, maybe even book smart, but he don't got no cockiness or the omniscient vibes. The story concept is all right and writing quality is not bad but the character development needs improvement

Author, I want u to read this and properly read this. Firstly ur perception of what a hero is gone. Saving a person doesn't mean he is a hero. You save them because they're in danger let alone and adult or a child. Secondly using the so called skills of the mc increases the chances of even the kid lily dying from the collar bursting it was stupid, unpragramatic. If u wanted to introduce such a segment you shldve done it when he was stronger or with more allies. Pls note that there is no person who can survive being alone, the concept of lone wolf doesn't exist. Be it in a book or in life. And yes, WT U JUST WROTE IS NOT A GOOD OF PIECE OF ART BUT A BAD NONCHALANT WRITING. Ik my reviews r strict and I'm only giving u this bcoz ur novel has good potential. Never write such a chapter again. Think before u put in ur art and creativity.....

It would be better if the author can cut down the method of revenge, Ren's character development has been very good until now. Wasting away a good written character for some biased view called revenge is such a waste. After all he doesn't need revenge, it was his own fault, a pragmatic protagonist is always liked by the media compared to smn who is arrogant n cocky wo the oblivious reasons

Pls don't make the MC op.