Translation is a lot better then the other version, but there are still too many mistakes and it really breaks the flow of the story. A lot of seemingly missing or incorrect words and the grammar is also not great.
Flowerhead_Evan
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LIKEUchiha : Destroy konoha at the start I think it's called, was last updated 7 months ago and has around 60 chapters
Dr3am_wa1ker:What's the other one?