Ifchickenandnuts

Nezumi

Oto and Kogarashi?

Overall it's fine, but the author has a habit of repeating the same thing over and over, one chapter was just talking about zoro being one shot over and over for half of it.

It's a fine read, everything makes sense and seems to be fine grammatically, but the story drags itself down by characters repeating the same thing over and over again, several paragraphs could be turned into one if the same lines weren't repeated over and over. Becomes a real slog to read through

Are his genitals gonna have a tiny hashirama face on them?

Bro this is like ten chapters ahead

The story is pleasant enough to read, the grammar and terminology is all correct, but it doesn't really go anywhere it just kind of drags itself along and becomes quite a tedious chore to read. It feels like the first 20 chapters could have been five and the rest of the story will probably follow the same trend