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Ichorblut
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2024-03-30 21:14

Alright, my second review for a Naruto Fic and in general, who would have thought? Anyways, since the number of chapters, this will be a review up to Ch.45. Since this takes place in Uzushigakure, this story is an AU. Which isn't a problem for me, as it wouldn't make sense otherwise. Almost every character is an OC, with many new and old clans added to the story. We also have jutsus and Kekkei Genkai. Now about the MC, the Genius tag makes sense as he has a lot of things at his disposal pre-academy. Without going into too much detail. However, he enjoys a lot of privilege due to his heritage. As for now, the character interactions are well-written the pacing is enjoyable. The usual problem with bloat and over-detailed description isn't there, thankfully. Some problems, which have already been mentioned like the detailed techniques of every taijutsu style. But as for now, this fanfic stands out for being very original (which is kind of a contradiction) but not for Naruto fanfics, especially on Webnovel. Every is repetitive and rarely creative or immersive.

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ABunds899
ABunds899Author

Thanks for the feedback! I have throughly been enjoying making this story and try my best to make it as enjoyable to read as possible. Hope you enjoy the many upcoming arcs I have planned!

Kamikaze_Eagle
Kamikaze_EagleLv4

Thanks for the actual review, instead of the standard 'its good, more chapters plz'. It really helps me decide if it's worth reading or not.

Ichorblut
IchorblutLv4

Well, I was just trying to explain what I like. Can be quite helpful in your everyday life😅

Kamikaze_Eagle:Thanks for the actual review, instead of the standard 'its good, more chapters plz'. It really helps me decide if it's worth reading or not.
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