Review Detail of WARAUSAGI in Be The God Isn't That Easy
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Dear readers. I'm writing a review after I finished chapter 30 which is the chapter where Kai Donovan as the 2nd MC, begins to recognize Odin as another existence in himself. Kai Donovan is denial about illogical things, so he needs time to think and digest what happened in him. Maybe you feel annoyed when you read how weak and cowardly Kai is. But I hope you can understand that being Kai Donovan is not that easy. Big Regard 笑Usagi
Be The God Isn't That Easy
WARAUSAGI
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Thank you for your suggest. I also think about it before, but since I write "Be The God Isn't That Easy" on my contract with webnovel, so I need to tell my AE first. If it possible I will change it, but if not, I'm sorry there's nothing I can do. 🥺
Oakley_Tallent:just letting you know author, your title does not make sense in English 🤷 you could change it to "being a god" and it would make sense
I will just let you know now that an editor would be very beneficial to your work. The title and the synopsis are already a clear dead giveaway English is not your strong suit. As someone who can let certain typos and mistakes slide having big typos like that can easily turn off other readers right away no matter how great your premise is. No one likes to read a novel that makes you guess what words the author is trying to use.
Yeah, but I can't do any about this 🤷♀️ because this has been contracted anyway. If I can change it, I will change. But since it contracted and I was contact my AE, she said I can't change it, so there's nothing I can do but finish what I've started.
BalsamicThunThighs:I will just let you know now that an editor would be very beneficial to your work. The title and the synopsis are already a clear dead giveaway English is not your strong suit. As someone who can let certain typos and mistakes slide having big typos like that can easily turn off other readers right away no matter how great your premise is. No one likes to read a novel that makes you guess what words the author is trying to use.
About the synopsis, I dont have a time yet to correct it. I will do it later after I took care of my other contracts at different online platform. But thank you for remainding me.
BalsamicThunThighs:I will just let you know now that an editor would be very beneficial to your work. The title and the synopsis are already a clear dead giveaway English is not your strong suit. As someone who can let certain typos and mistakes slide having big typos like that can easily turn off other readers right away no matter how great your premise is. No one likes to read a novel that makes you guess what words the author is trying to use.