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Mrs_TNTLv1511mth
2024-04-12 17:14

It's a bit long, but my honest thoughts. 😁 It's currently still early in this novels development as of Friday, April 12th, 2024 (Why do we Americans write it this way? The more I interact with others from around the world the more I agree we are the ones that make it more difficult but going Month, Day, Year instead of going Day, Month, Year or Year, Month, Day... 😅🤣😂) However, what is written so far has been really good. There are very few mistakes and weather. This author is a true amateur or a seasoned published author with an editor she's still human and is bound to make mistakes, so absolutely zero judgment here, just stating facts. With that said I think some areas I would prefer to have a bit more info on are simply just not addressed yet because the author plans to address or explain it through the story development that will be coming, so I am tey to be patient. I am still a bit skeptical about the ML but I definitely get the feeling there is a Hella lot more to him that what he shows to everyone plus I am not sure if it's all truly him, if you get what I am saying. I will continue to update my review on this novel. As of right now, I do recommend this to others, but be aware it will not be a light-hearted lovely and pure romance but a drama filled one that will take you on a rollercoaster but in a good way! 🎢 No spoilers here. Honestly, the chapters are free for a very good 60+ chapters (I think it's now 70+, but I can't remember exactly, so I am being cautious) are free so other then your time you have nothing to risk to at least try reading this wonderful novel & seeing if it's for you or not. Great job to the author & I can not wait for more updates! 👏👏👏👏👏🫶

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Mrs_TNTLv15

Correction 40+ Chapters are free. I didn't notice my typos until after I hit post! I feel so stupid, but I was in a hurry. I do apologize for this misinformation it was unintentional but still wrong. 😪 😔 🙍‍♀️🙇‍♀️🙍‍♀️😔🤐

MsFrothyDreamerLv15

I've been seeing your comments on the chapters, and they’re seriously amazing! You write whole paragraphs with so many cool thoughts. It’s mind-blowing! 😄 but at the same time I think it's really cute, and honestly, I really like you for it. 😊❤️

Mrs_TNTLv15

😊🙇‍♀️😃Thank you, I've had some not so nice & just negative comments about my lengthy comments but thankfully never from an author. To me, the comments are like a book club & and honestly, a great way to give feedback to the authors. I think people should try to see it from the author's perspective, as they would want to know the readers' true thoughts because who would love someone truly appreciating your work? I know that I do. Anyways, thank you so very much for your comment, I needed to uplift. ☺️

MsFrothyDreamer:I've been seeing your comments on the chapters, and they’re seriously amazing! You write whole paragraphs with so many cool thoughts. It’s mind-blowing! 😄 but at the same time I think it's really cute, and honestly, I really like you for it. 😊❤️
MsFrothyDreamerLv15

I'm really glad my comment could uplift you. I totally agree that feedback should be a way to share thoughts and help authors improve their work. Your lengthy comments are like a rare gem for writers, giving them deep insights and showing true appreciation, support, and engagement in their work. It's unfortunate that some people leave negative comments, but know that your thoughtful feedback is incredibly valuable. Keep sharing your thoughts because they're precious! 😊🫶

Mrs_TNT:😊🙇‍♀️😃Thank you, I've had some not so nice & just negative comments about my lengthy comments but thankfully never from an author. To me, the comments are like a book club & and honestly, a great way to give feedback to the authors. I think people should try to see it from the author's perspective, as they would want to know the readers' true thoughts because who would love someone truly appreciating your work? I know that I do. Anyways, thank you so very much for your comment, I needed to uplift. ☺️
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