Item: Creating games in the future
Rating: 4.4
Author: FrenchEclairBoi

FrenchEclairBoiLv144mth

2024-08-25 11:48

This story has to be one of my all time favourites. The plot is extremely well developed and while I find the history of the world has a few holes in it like how does a space fairing civilization lose all forms of entertainment media when one planet is destroyed it does little to take away from the plot. Each character feels like they have an actual history to them and it just sucks you in. I wish the updates were more consistent but that is the main thing. Overall I give 5/5 writing quality, 3/5 stability of updates, 5/5 story development, 5/5 character development, 4/5 world background. I am currently up to chapter 34

Creating games in the future

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