FrenchEclairBoi

No way he’s still here

Been her since chap 13 and hasn’t been a let down. Keep it up mate but please dont get burnt out. Best 40K / only good one on WebNovel.

Hello, it has indeed been a few days

This story has to be one of my all time favourites. The plot is extremely well developed and while I find the history of the world has a few holes in it like how does a space fairing civilization lose all forms of entertainment media when one planet is destroyed it does little to take away from the plot. Each character feels like they have an actual history to them and it just sucks you in. I wish the updates were more consistent but that is the main thing. Overall I give 5/5 writing quality, 3/5 stability of updates, 5/5 story development, 5/5 character development, 4/5 world background. I am currently up to chapter 34

Honestly this story is great and i know i would be more then happy to wait a week for these chapters. Obviously i wouldnt complain if it was every three days or every hour ;). But seriously take your time writing keeping it to a good quality and dont get burned out. Would hate to lose another one of my favourite books to burn out. :(

Yes

I don’t believe adding another female lead to the story would be good for its future however if you do choose to add more limit it to only one more please.

Honestly. That’s about the same as a lot of novels mate. Don’t strain yourself. All I know is that I have another novel to look forward to the next upload. Take your time and take car of yourself.

Honestly this one and the Vampire one are my favourite, not beacuase of marvel but i just love the concepts. Unfortunatley there are not alot of good halo related fics. If anyone knows one please let me know,

Hey mate just do what you think you can do bt if you do choose to drop please let everyone know.