Review Detail of Atalyn_Navia in Giratina in Marvel MCU AU

Item: Giratina in Marvel MCU AU
Rating: 3

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Atalyn_NaviaLv218dAtalyn_Navia

I've only read 3 chapters and this makes me interested, but what I don't like is the writing of the author doesn't use spacing in each paragraph and almost combines each paragraph together. and to be honest, it made me quite confused when reading, and made me feel lazy about reading some things that I felt weren't important

Giratina in Marvel MCU AU

Spectre_Ouroboros

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Spectre_OuroborosAuthorSpectre_Ouroboros

To be honest, inexperience. As I kept writing, I started separating more and more. Another point is that when writing, I use my computer, and what seems like a short few sentences or moderate paragraph ends up like a massive one on the phone.

Atalyn_Navia:I became curious as to why the author combined long texts into one and did not create gaps for several lines for paragraph

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Atalyn_NaviaLv2Atalyn_Navia

I became curious as to why the author combined long texts into one and did not create gaps for several lines for paragraph

18d

Delight_3462Lv1Delight_3462

I really enjoy how the author is open to constructive feedback, and how he Branches out to create this new universe.

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