Item: Shining God in Danmachi
Rating: 5

CozmoooAuthor8mth

2024-02-23 19:23

Well, as is customary, I come to leave my own 5 stars. This work is a personal project. I've read many novels, and after reading so much, I thought, I can do one too. With that idea, I embark on this journey, my first novel and my first experience. So I hope you'll be patient with me. I accept suggestions and advice. I hope you like the work!

Shining God in Danmachi

Cozmooo

4.6

53 Chs

Liked by 22 people

Replies11

_Hori_Lv4

it's good

8mth

Helios_SolLv5

a multiverse story with no harem this story is trash

8mth

FinnsRevengeLv4

Multiverse with no harem and you add in another harem protag? greyrat family added as well?

8mth

Random_OmnipotentLv4

how rare a clown calling others a clown 🤡 and yeah i am a clown no need to say it since i know you about to say it to me when you read this

FinnsRevenge:Multiverse with no harem and you add in another harem protag? greyrat family added as well?
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8mth

FinnsRevengeLv4

lol

Random_Omnipotent:how rare a clown calling others a clown 🤡 and yeah i am a clown no need to say it since i know you about to say it to me when you read this

8mth

Random_OmnipotentLv4

???

FinnsRevenge:lol
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8mth

Random_OmnipotentLv4

I read your bio and i hate the fact that you're absolutely right

FinnsRevenge:lol
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8mth

Jake_PomeLv1

Helios_Sol:a multiverse story with no harem this story is trash

8mth

ItsyourfriendmikeLv1

Jake_Pome:
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8mth

Caio_RogerioLv2

Helios_Sol:a multiverse story with no harem this story is trash

7mth

Laveil_YatesLv15

Please don’t discontinue

6mth

Other Reviews

Hugo_AdamLv4

Man sad, man scroll, man see no harem tag, man happy .

8mth

NunuXDLv12

Can't keep reading... The Mc is just a Simp for Riviera. He lives million or bilions of years as a god and is still a Simp for a 2d anime girl that he saw on his past life? In one moment he is acting like he is the stronger being in the world, in the other moment he is an Otaku that can't stop think about an elf he saw in an anime millions of years ago lol. And not only this, but why the author made the MC so powerful and respected in the godly world, but it the human world he is just acting like a poor guy. Where is the proud he had? Bro have the power to destroy the world of he wants, he acted like that in the godly world, but in the mortal world he just ignore that and became a poor guy that has to be humble to a king that hate him? This is definetly not a novel for me

8mth

LeafPandaLv13

This story has a strong potential!! Keep this up as I believe more people are gonna read this. Especially the idea of this story is very unique compared to others!!

8mth

MARLENE_ANGELLv1

TRUTH THIS NOVEL IS EPIC AND FUN TO READ NO BS WHEN YOU READ YOU HAVE FUN BECAUSE IT HAS A STORY TO TELL YOU.I LOVE THE CHEMISTRY BETWEEN THE CHARACTERS IT WAS FUN AND THE PLOT STORY IS DONE RIGHT WITH A LOT OF POTENTIAL FOR A BIGGER UNIVERSE ..SO I HOPE IN THE FUTURE THIS STORY GOES BIG BECAUSE IT HAS THAT ELEMENT. I LOVE THIS NOVEL SO YOU WILL TOO.

8mth

Akros_ZeroLv4

I would be very blunt about this fiction. It's interesting and good all said but Mc is a trash. He is supposedly million years old and has a god like mindset, which I see none in him. Secondly, he whines like a child, and acts submissive in front of Riveria. I get it you wanna make a Mc that doesn't acts like he his on high, but realize what the heck you have made. You say he sees her as wife so he acts like that, but actually that's totally wrong. They aren't hudband and wife and secondly making romance so slow, not to mention. Riveria blames him for everything, like it's his kistake they aren't getting members, etc. In the end he have become a outlet for her frustration, the character development and world background both suck. Otherwise it's good, and well since the main part of it sucks anyway, I don't know what you should expect. You can try to make a rewrite considering you have a very low number of chaps. You will need to plan for the lore, plot and things more. Lastly, you gotta focus on Mc's personality. He should have been a bit of aloof, cold yet kind personality as a God of light. Riveria should have developed a crush on him, and he as well. That's how romance have progressed. I will be blunt, this isn't quite good. but you can try to make it better for your future readers. Anyway I will be leaving. -Akros peace out...

8mth

_DEKIM_Lv1

The first chapters were perfect, but then the problems started. So far there are two problems in my opinion. The first problem is the little voice in the protagonist's head. Second problem and rudeus in the family.😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒

8mth

hunter2kidLv13

I like the way this story is going the main character is OP but not to the point where it ruins the story.

8mth

VirginYoungMasterLv4

This young master is very handsome. Bow down to me mortal!

8mth

PathSeeker_Lv15

Amazing story keep up the good work.

8mth

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