webnovel
79_amar
79_amarLv410mth
2024-07-09 07:19

well the story was great but the fact that nobody has been talking about that his parents was killed by third lord and danzo and others but he just kill danzo and he is just like not care about his parents well the author himself has said the he hasn't meet his parents everyday and only 1mo or 1y but if you parents die and has power to revenge Why? not Kill them 😭 he is so positive he is like nothing has happened but the story is good if not for family well I'm just read it for time go by and the way lord third act he is just like new character for the story well if you read countless fanfiction you may know that lord third has kill the mc family many time but he is like that was good for greater well this part I'm not understanding it 😔 there was no need for character development 😕 you have just kill lord third he know it that was this boyfriend plans and he didn't stop it if you fix this parts you maybe be a par of best fanfiction

Konoha: The Template System(Reboot)

Tobi_444
4.7
73 Chs

Liked by 7 people

LIKE
empty img

No replies. Be the first!

Other Reviews
Glebby_Boi
Glebby_BoiLv4

I’m an old reader of this work, enjoyed it quite a bit. Kinda forgot most of the plot by this point, so I’m excited to restart going through it again)) I was hoping if you could tell what would the approximate chapter release frequency be? It won’t stop me from reading the novel, just wanna know how quickly do you think you’ll be able to catch up to the pre-rewrite’s chapter count.

1mth

Odil
OdilLv14

The grammar needs serious work... So many 5 star reviews with nobody mentioning the simple fact that the grammar is horrendous at times is fishy.

1yr
behind_your_sister
behind_your_sisterLv4

please don't drop one of the best TOBIRAMA fanfic

1yr
Passerby_Venne
Passerby_VenneLv14

It's pretty good! Too much point of view of people we don't really care about, since I want to read from the MC's pov. Except from that it's really good! Did I say it's good?!

1yr
Lord_Azathoth
Lord_AzathothLv4

I would like to know who is the love interest in the story?

1yr
PAX69
PAX69Lv10

The author answers me one thing, when the MC gained the Tobirama model will he also inherit Tobirama's Senju lineage? Why, if so, will the MC have vitality, physical strength, a large amount of superior chakra, and will he pass these advantages on to his dependents?

1yr
tedmosby2016
tedmosby2016Lv14

Don't waste your time. If you can't switch off your brain this is not for you. It gets worse. Mc doesn't have a personality nor does his motivations make any sense. He has no ambition. He just does things. The author makes up things as he goes along and it is so very obvious it is annoying.

9mth
Gd_Sys
Gd_SysLv4

moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

1yr
Hyuga_Tobirama
Hyuga_TobiramaModerator

Great story and it’s not even close to being half way yet. The fact the mc is just like my favourite Naruto character Tobirama Senju makes the story 100x better. The author is talented and is a good story teller

11mth
mantaege
mantaegeLv3

i reallyyyyyyy like it because its Tobirama senju template i dont see him often like i see few fanfictions but "few" and i must say its really good but its shame that he doesnt look like tobirama and he isnt from senju clan so that it would make sense well he does have his silver hair but not his red eyes i would imagine him like a boy tobirama but have some similiarities like one red line which tobirama has 3 lines and i mean the middle one and red eyes and ITS

1yr
Related Stories

Pokemon: Skybound

Transported to the world of Pokémon, Kai begins his journey in Kanto with his trusted Ralts. Along the way, he battles iconic Trainers, encounters legendary Pokémon, and thwarts the plans of villainous teams. From the Indigo League to the Galar League, Kai’s relentless pursuit of championship glory takes him across generations and regions. As both a Trainer and special investigator, he uncovers mysteries, forges powerful bonds, and even catches the eye of Champion Cynthia. In a world of battles, bonds, and adventure, what legacy will Kai leave behind? ---- •I don't own Pokemon or any other characters other than the Oc's. This is purely a fanfiction. *"*"*"*"*"* This is a Translation Alternative names:我收服了宝可梦 Author: 侵掠如火

iamxeno · Anime & Comics
4.3
379 Chs

MHA : Cursed by Fate

The story starts at the end of another. A young boy reincarnated in the world of 'My Hero Academia' and he was born with the template system of 'Ryomen Sukuna' from Jujutsu Kaisen. He was born decades before the canon story starts and he was in the same generation with people like Rumi, Ryukyu, Aizawa etc. He lived the typical reincarnated life. He had a great family this time around, went to UA, faced multiple challenges and overcame them, fell in love and went on to fight the main villain All for One. But here is the twist. This story will start only after the main character complete the Sukuna Template which is the end of his story. We will skip the whole part of getting to UA, training his power, falling in love, completing system mission etc. This is because the main character is truly himself only after the system is completed. That is when the main character became truly free again, without system missions and Sukuna's influence. This story will be like 'Frieren: Beyond Journey's End' where the story will reveal the past while also moving forward. I am not very good with synopsis so please just read the first few chapters. .. .. //////////////////////// What to expect : #A good MC but fate wants him to be evil. Being good and having Sukuna template does not go well. #Rumi as the main romantic partner with a few girls here and there. It's complicated but ultimately in the harem category. #Overpowered MC from the start. Only All Might and All for One are even in his level of strength. #Revenge and tragedy. This mostly happen before the story starts but in the current timeline there will be no tragedy. #Although MC is in an older generation, the canon timeline will still be relevant. #Slight AU on the years of characters. Mostly the old heroes so that they can be in the same generation. For Example Midnight is like two years younger so that she was MC's classmate That is all.

Willbe · Anime & Comics
4.8
17 Chs

Pokemon: Radical Redux

You know the drill, a medical student was watching the finale episode of Pokemon. "Man can't believe it's finally over. Looking at his clock, Shoot I'm going to be late." But our protagonist met our old friend Truck-kun due to a change in destiny. "At least things aren't so bad I get to start my Journey, wait why am I Ash, Why is almost everything and everyone different, and why is this world so much harder than the original?!" Additional Tags: Maybe-Harem, Not stupid MC, multiple plot lines, Random decisions from dice rolls No dead pokemon parts to increase strength No potential stuff Only training methods and bond ________________________ So hey, this is my first fanfic, Please don't murder me, secondly, this is an AU with anime, games, and manga elements, with a bit of the novel. Earlier chapters are ruff, but I think the later ones get better. Also if you have a complaint, Idea, criticism, or whatever, fell free to say it I love reading feedback from you all

Katsu39 · Anime & Comics
4.7
354 Chs

Pokemon: With Title System

Two years. No more than two years since he woke up in the world of Pokemon, which was very much a mix of anime and games. After working as a Ranger for more than a years, Asahi finally fulfilled the requirement of catching 1000 poachers with his Shiny Gardevoir. Again gaining a new reward from his Title system. Now with his newly caught Dratini he started a new chapter of his life. Now he was not just a Ranger. A International Police under none other than Lance. A half-backed Pokemon professor. He wanted to slack off and enjoy his new life. But because of good or bad luck he had no other choice but to work. At least stop team rocket from talkin over the League. [Make three girls fall in love with you. Title achieved 'Scumbag' ] "Wait system where is the three girls!? And what bullshit you are speaking?" Asahi asked as he saw His Blue shiny Gardevoir looking at him with her heterochromatic eyes and looked quite angry! "..." *** This is a translated work. RAW name: 我，宝可梦称号大师！ You can read advanced chapters at P@treon.com/NahinS77.

NahinS77 · Anime & Comics
4.4
240 Chs

Mushoku Tensei: Reincarnated as a Beast Race

After his death, Aoi Hiroto is reincarnated as a beast-like race, similar to Ghislaine's race, but with the memories of his past life intact. Now, torn between his animal instincts and human rationality, he tries to find his place in this new world. While Rudeus continues his journey, the protagonist forms new connections and learns more about this new world. Warnings: - The MC is like Rudeus, he doesn't know the world of Mushoku Tensei, for him, this is a new world with magic and swords, but he has seen other known animes. - MC is 3 years older than Rudeus, having been born in K404. - Rudeus will still exist in this timeline, but the chapters that will show his point of view will be very rare, unless he is interacting with the MC. -The confirmed harem members so far are Ghislaine and Eris. I plan for this story to have around 500 chapters, maybe a little more or a little less than that. The cover was created by illustrator Winter, based on the characters from the work Mushoku Tensei, authored by Rifujin na Magonote. I do not own any rights to the characters or elements of the work depicted in the art or story, except for the original characters (OC's) created in this work. English is not my first language, but I will try my best not to make mistakes.

DaoistJunkYard · Anime & Comics
4.8
154 Chs

My Hero Academia: Izuku Reloaded

This book was inspired by My Hero Academia: Adaptation "Who decided being quirkless means you can't be a hero? Those are just rules made by people who never tried to break them." When a battle-hardened warrior dies in one world and awakens in the body of a quirkless boy in another, the rules of heroism are about to change. Armed with combat experience from a darker realm and an iron will forged in warfare, he sets his sights on U.A. High School - the pinnacle of hero education. But in a society where superpowers are everything, his approach to strength might just shatter the entire system. Behind a gentle smile lies the mind of a warrior. As he builds his power through unconventional means, one thing becomes clear: rules were meant to be broken, and this world's definition of "hero" is about to be rewritten. Sometimes the strongest ability isn't a quirk at all. It's the will to change everything.

WisteriaNovels · Anime & Comics
4.8
108 Chs

My Journey as Fourth Kazekage

An office worker is suddenly transmigrated into the body of Rasa, who has just been appointed as the Fourth Kazekage. With the looming threat of the Third Shinobi War and the dire state of his village, he seems like just another unfortunate soul destined to suffer. Wrong! "What the… I have a Karma Seal from Boruto? Isn’t that supposed to be a seed of some Otsutsuki dude? But whatever. Even if I don’t have an overpowered ability like the Sharingan, I still have this Karma Seal. All I have to do is use it to grow stronger and ensure my survival." From that moment on, the new Rasa begins plotting for the sake of his village while using his only cheat to become stronger. === English isn’t my first language, and I don’t own anything. Read advance chapters here: www.patreon.com/OberonLA

OberonLA · Anime & Comics
4.6
144 Chs
Login