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Zarion116
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2024-09-29 02:13

Needs reviews but I’ll rate to help. Please keep writing

My New Eyes Can See Through Clothes

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Z0d_
Z0d_Lv4

It was promising until the MC got his new apartment. To sum it up, his life almost gets ruined by two girls, and the next day he takes them out to eat and is all buddy buddy. Simp and beta MC.

1mth

Zabne123
Zabne123Lv15

I've read 55 and it has some really good potential but the Mc needs some honest work. I also don't see where this story is going. The story lost sight of the first villain. The Mc for me is too passive when it comes to dealing with people. He seems smart but no real goals are shown yet. I feel this needs some work. Like I said it's has potential to go far. The first 20 chapters really pulled me in.

1mth
Nachtregen
NachtregenLv14

I have read this one once… so it got a new edit?

1mth
Alanray64
Alanray64Lv15

I just finished 55 chapters and nothing has caught my interest to this point. The initial chapters had me intrigued, losing sight, regaining sight and a hint of being the chosen. Yet from there it just dipped down to mediocrity. The MC is pretty sad, guessing low EQ and lacking of anything defining a protagonist. Gifted this divine skill, he decides to share a house, yeh not asking who the room mates are was a pretty rookie move but he really did not need to share accomodation as he could easily rent a single room apartment with his earnings. I imagine the author decided this was the best way he could meet some women, who knows, but from this was seen that the MC was stuck in his ways and knows no better, chance to change practically zero. One thing that irked me was that he did nothing to find out where the person who ordered his sight taken away was or to ensure he was safe fro. Being traced etc. just many lost opportunities. The story has potential but the delivery of this just got lost on the way. Read the first 55 chapters and put it down to experience.

1mth
Drigok_Yuri_Is_NTR
Drigok_Yuri_Is_NTRLv15

This is not a proper review will write one if this novel is for me, just got a question. Will be any yuri in the harem not a fan. That also means light yuri with the mc in threesome etc?

15d
Jacob_Winkler
Jacob_WinklerLv15

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