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Bierbart
BierbartLv141yr
2024-03-03 17:58

Concept is interesting and could be great. Sadly the MC leaves too much open for improvement and is really too bad. naive, mentally challenged, selfloathing and has a hero complex so he ruins a lot which influences the story development too. one of the reasons i dropped the oc anime too since one cant root for deku honestly since every other character is better. also the powers are pretty much nerfed a lot in a sense that makes the consistency quite bad.

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Daoist2QCU2E
Daoist2QCU2ELv1

The MC is OC is this work...

nerghomek
nerghomekLv4

El fic tiene menos de 20 capítulos, si las cosas fueran tan rápido, rápidamente se volvería aburrido, es mejor dejar un tiempo para desarrollar al personaje poco a poco

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