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2024-03-10 22:35

While the story started somewhat well it only went downhill from there, the one piece world is portrayed well enough but the way harry interacts with the happenings there is a bit weird for me (not counting the part in the grade I gave because it’s really more of a opinion), but the Harry Potter world is incredibly annoying, you take the people IQ and divide them by 100, then take the most annoying cliches of their reaction and multiply that 1.000 and you have the Harry Potter worls in this story. What I’m trying to say is that the story can even become good down the line but that is if you can go past this part, I dropped and picked up this ff three times until I got to 20 chapters

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