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Icy881
Icy881Lv59mth
2024-03-09 12:41

the idea for the story is good but poorly executed such as turning pretty much everyone in HP world into idiots and villains, now I get hating Dumbeldor or the aunt family but this was way too much, and worst is how illogical the story is, like using the gacha machine in a shady alley for over 10 minutes with no one including the thiefs to take notice of them and how the drops from it is all about runes... so yeah total wish fulfillment with poorly executed story design i can only give 5 stars to world background cause well they are HP and one piece

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