Item: One Piece: I wield thunder and lightning
Rating: 3.8
Author: lbaro97

lbaro97Lv149mth

2024-03-01 04:25

I like the setting of the story and I am especially looking forward to what happens after the Rocks Pirates disband. One big problem I see with this story is the fact that the the writing / translation quality seems to get worse with every chapter. It starts out allright but as of approximately chapter 70 it really starts bothering me...

One Piece: I wield thunder and lightning

DaoistAutumn_rain

4.2

626 Chs

Liked by 7 people

Replies2

DaoistAutumn_rainAuthor

Its sometimes a nightmare to translate these stuff, Sengoku is called Law garp is called cap rocks is called Locke.etc If you ever see that the quality went down a bit then remember im currently suffering from brain rot 😂😂😂 Anyway ty for review and i will translate better in future.

9mth

Yuki_1Lv11

lol

DaoistAutumn_rain:Its sometimes a nightmare to translate these stuff, Sengoku is called Law garp is called cap rocks is called Locke.etc If you ever see that the quality went down a bit then remember im currently suffering from brain rot 😂😂😂 Anyway ty for review and i will translate better in future.

8mth

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DaoistAutumn_rainAuthor

Shameless review from the Scholar here, This story is based around our mc who came from earth and knows the plot pretty well. Enjoy the world building and the exhilarating action scenes. Please continue to support this fanfic so that i can continue to release it for free

10mth

bla_bluppLv11

Translation is super. Mc is just your typical arrogant hypocritical mc xianxia style. I for one cant root for such an mc but thats just my opinion alone. This is just warning for people that dont like that so they can save time.

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QwerttipperLv4

This seems like a decent mtl translation. Pls put the original work as a link for the people.

10mth

DaoistW6wuW3Lv4

this look like a mtl --‐-------- zz z z z z z zz

10mth

CouchPotatoDandyLv5

I've read the first few chapters and although the translation was done well without any grammar mistakes, the story itself was not that good. The story starts with the MC as already quite powerful without any explanation or details, it really fells like I started to the fanfic from the middle of the story instead of the first chapter. I thought that as I read a few more chapters things will clear up, unfortunately they didn't, and it seem the author unsuccessfully tried to continue with an air of mystery. So eventually after a few chapters I gave up and dropped it...

1mth

AvareLv5

Story is going good but sometimes it jumps from A to C. Generally I want to read with every update. There are lots of places to improve but for a light novel and a fanfiction it's a good one.

9mth

Pirate_King0Lv14

the concept is good i will give it a try and change the review after words it might be good or bad i don't know 😊 ---------------------------------------------------------

10mth

Beatupdreamer34Lv4

Well, this fan fic was translated entirely using 'AI'. Too many unnatural conversations ruined it completely. It's better to read mtl than this. That's my opinion of course. If someone else likes to read AI works try it. Typical Chinese mc of course.

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Shukaku_EnjoyerLv4

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