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Beyond_Lv31yr
2024-02-21 10:57

it's very well written, the story is still in its initial stages and the protagonist has had no real conflicts other than the trap of the Goddess who sent him, but it's an interesting start and looks promising, of course, if it's not abandoned like 99% of fanfictions, please write a good story author

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JFalcon
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I'm trying my best to keep a healthy schedule! The chapters are now slightly smaller so I can write one every single day in my off-time. I hope to make this a long-lasting habit! As for conflicts for the main character, the Dream Realm will be his greatest challenge yet...

SpaceXMoon
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I think it would be better if you released l4 chapters; two days a week instead of 1 every day to give yourself a little wiggle room and not have to write too much.

JFalcon:I'm trying my best to keep a healthy schedule! The chapters are now slightly smaller so I can write one every single day in my off-time. I hope to make this a long-lasting habit! As for conflicts for the main character, the Dream Realm will be his greatest challenge yet...
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