Review Detail of Transhumanist in Game Of Thrones I The Chronicles Of Aquiles Viridium

Generally weak story but the MC is the weakest point imo. Just changing the MC's name to something simple and suitable for the setting like Tom, Bob, Jon etc would probably make the story noticeably better. As a rule of thumb if I see a MC with a childish name it makes me think the author is probably a teenager in their chuuni/edgy phase. Generally these types of stories are written with a more simplified mentality, they really quickly make themselves known. It's rarely ever proven wrong.