The story is interesting but one chapter a week is very slow I almost always have to reread part of the previous chapter for you to understand what is happening in terms of the previous chapters I barely remember anything it's really a shame since it's a good story, despite the ridiculousness of the penultimate chapter everyone being kidnapped without anyone knowing or seeing anything.

Honestly, Hermione's attitudes may be bearable in the books, but anyone who has dealt with a real-life Hermione knows how unbearable she is, I only had to deal with one of those twice a week and it was horrible, if you're better than them, it's even worse, she deserves to not have friends, I think because the actress Emma is very beautiful people tend to ignore her character's personality.

Leaving him quadriplegic, death would be a very easy ending

Look, the story is actually better than average, it could be much better, the romance between the MC and Dora was very natural despite the speed you managed to make their interactions very natural, it's probably because I've been reading really bad stories lately but despite Despite not being a five-star story, it is a good story to pass the time.

I don't know why it offers 3 wishes if in the end it will give more extra wishes, which is an exaggeration for the HP universe.

The fight was interesting but I'm afraid that this excuse of destroying everything and killing everyone will be used more than once, if so the story will lose its charm very quickly however for now I'm looking forward to the next chapters, the fight was really interesting.

Well, I won't delete it from my library, I'm looking forward to seeing the changes made.

Well, it must be because I only know a little of his animation versions and in the animations he is very weak, he was defeated by a poorly trained character in a hand-to-hand fight, even if he underestimated Shirou it was still a defeat, besides, are you sure that It's a top two for Marvel, it has some mutants that I can't imagine him defeating or some of the stronger versions.

Look, the story isn't bad, but it's taking a while to get into significant events, the story doesn't seem to have a clear direction, Gil is a character that barely reaches half the ranking of Marvel's strongest, it's difficult to see a good direction from Gil because of his personality he ends up not fitting in anywhere and with the MC having the original personality still fixed to his body it cuts a lot of development and closes many paths, he is a character that normally follows the solitary path but he is not even close to being strong enough to do this in the Marvel universe and the path I would choose would be to use the MCU plot as a basis if it is a harem or not use Hella as the main pair or one of the main ones to love the plot better, she is a very rarely used, I would eliminate Gil's original personality whether through a personality fusion or some other plot device, have the MC physically train with the Asgardians since Gil is almost useless in a hand-to-hand fight and perhaps investing in magic could be a bit cliché but him being isolated on that island will limit him a lot.

It will probably be Danzo's clown, from what I understand Hiruzen will not be any heroic grandmother figure in this fanfic, a part of this story showed him looking scared at Sakumo, I think he will probably support Danzo's movement, as for why he doesn't fear the MC probably because he thinks he can manipulate him because he's a child, Sakumo is someone who has no direct connection with Hiruzen and is too old to be one of Hiruzen's puppies.

Anyone who will support someone who puts them in mortal danger puts them at mortal risk, and even if they survived their careers were effectively over that was how they would be treated by the rest of the population, as far as the family knew he had stolen and with everything they knew there was a lot of logic.

So the MC's objective is to be a background character and let Isse's trash have the best female characters in DXD, honestly this story seems like a waste of time for the MC who doesn't want to change anything and is just going to babysit the cast It's a waste of space MC, I'll try to read the next chapters since God changed some things but my expectations are low after this introduction, but the impression it left is that it's going to be terrible from beginning to end, if there is an end .

I had a bad first impression of the MC, he seems like a delusional idiot, doing bad things without a real objective is really chaotic, when I saw the example of poisoning a child with a poison to see what happens, a poison that you won't use for anything , there is no difference with the other example of breaking a random child's neck, both are chaotic evil, an example of a neutral evil MC is Light Yagami and I think also Gellart Grindelwald, despite the boring objective of world domination.

Seriously, where would he know what AI is, you can't read this, the author smokes drugs before writing this.

I know that with different types of amnesia his seems like it would be the one that loses all his sense of identity but it doesn't make him lose common sense like not forgetting what the sun and the moon are what a telephone is, so he probably shouldn't have forgotten what is magic, honestly it sucks the way memory loss works in this story because it just doesn't make any sense, honestly it's extremely frustrating to read apart from the completely irritating personality that the MC has now I made an effort to read this far and I even skipped some parts that simply won't make any difference to the story, I'll see if I can read a few more chapters but it's very difficult.

I liked the story, it's really very original, I'm looking forward to the next chapters.

It's a shame but it's understandable.

If he doesn't plan on getting involved with the throne there's no reason for him to let Dany follow the canonical path, it doesn't make any sense but coming from the MC who plays with feces, logic shouldn't be his thing.

Wow, what an immature MC, instead of sending clones to warn the village, he decided to fight with the spies.

It's a bit annoying that Harry has a detestable personality, plus studying with Harry doesn't automatically make people know him, there was no proof that he didn't enter of his own free will, it was just his word, this added to the fact that the school administration didn't say nothing just makes the situation even more confusing, the previous years leave a negative mark since Harry in his first year Harry joined the Gryffindor team and this right after disobeying the teacher and gained points in a mysterious way at the end of that year, in the second year for most it would seem that he wanted to attract attention by speaking in snake language in front of them and probably for most it would seem impossible for him not to know that he had this ability so once again it is reinforced that he likes to attract attention and this right after arrive at school in a flying car, so it's actually a normal reaction, of course, minus the part about taking away the glory of the Hufflepuffs, as it doesn't make sense, apart from the fact that he seems to have a lot of privileges and freedom at school, without getting to know him in a personal and profound way, it is unlikely that people will believe him, it is possible that it even seems that Dumbledore made Harry enter the tournament, but no one will question Dumbledore from the students, they will take it out on the privileged boy, many forget that the story it's almost always from Harry's point of view so he has a very distorted view like why the minister doesn't believe him and Dumbledore that Voldemort revived without any proof other than his and Dumbledore's word and that's completely irrational, or the fact that for him all Slytherins are evil, along with the purebloods, if they were all evil and supported Voldemort, then even with Voldemort's defeat, the deatheaters still dominated everything through politics, after all, the ministry was in control of Voldemort, it is likely that the majority would be neutral and did not support either side, whether due to disagreement of ideology or fear, the ministry was controlled not by supporters but by people who were afraid of Voldemort since if they were supporters then Voldemort's death would not have made any difference, as I said the What makes more sense is that a good portion of the people in power were neutral and not racist, but they also weren't supporting a group that was in favor of changing part of their country's wizarding culture or losing the power that their ancestors gave their blood to build. .