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2024-03-13 00:41

I'm going to give this story 5 stars and continue the 5 star run. Not because it's perfect because no story is. However, it is so good and stands out so much that it only seems right. This tale is made in an innovative form, has nice spacing, is an easy/smooth read, has stellar variance, and never seems to run dull. It isn't your typical adventure and keeps readers guessing about what will happen next. The cover is awesome. I definitely will try to keep up with this novel. My advice to the writer is to just take a little time and a few lines to lay out what the environment looks like and describe how the main characters look. To the author, I welcome you to check out my original fanfic "Avatar: The Vindicated Avenger" it is a sequel to "Avatar: Macai's Journey". It can be found here on Webnovel with a quick search. You may want to read the first chapter or two of AMJ to get a feeling of what the first story was like but that isn't necessary.

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Both the story and characters are very interesting and intriguing which really catches my interest in reading all the available chapters. There's only a few yet but I can say that this novel will keep on improving and escalating into the story and characters development. Keep it up!

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the cover is beautiful! the first chapter is very sad though. the main character seems to have a lot of potential and i like that I know kind of where it takes place in the first line.

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A very interesting read. I'm a huge fan of characters overcoming or find a reason to persevere past tragedy. The prose and structure are also high quality and I look forwards to seeing how the story progresses and how the characters grow.

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First off, the writing quality is great. It felt real and I wanted to know more immediately. Which leads me to the next thing, I wanted know why certain things happened or how they were happening. Other than that though this is a very strong start and I can't wait to see where it goes.

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This will be my final and only shameless review of this novel, All I have to say is that I'm fairly new to this novel genre and I'm going to try my best. If you have any questions, leave them here ⤵

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