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I like to write science fiction and fantasy stories. I am the same user as brianhanes117. For some reason, I cannot sign into that account. Feel free to check out my Infinite Domain series on Amazon.

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Brian_Hanes_1172 days ago
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Kanna's Marvelous Adventures continues the Avatar: Macai's Journey legacy with a brand-new twist, exciting original characters, and awesome new details for one of AMJ's most important heroes. You won't regret reading this.
Avatar: Kanna's Marvelous Adventures
Anime & Comics · Brian_Hanes_117
Brian_Hanes_11712 days ago
Posted
The world background is sensational, writing quality is decent but I think there are too many massive paragraphs that should be split up for a more casual read. The story develops well, characters are intriguing, and the updates seem steady. With that being said, I'd like to see more visual description of character dress, thoughts, and emotions. I invite the author to read my story Avatar: The Vindicated Avenger.
Endless Path : Infinite Cosmos
Anime & Comics · Einlion
Brian_Hanes_11712 days ago
Commented
Elite worldbuilding right here
After four years of effort and the change of a President, the populace was once again exposed to news regarding the child. They were able to learn the child possessed a mutated blood-type that emitted a unique form of radiation that was able to revitalize cells and even break down other mutations and abnormalities within the body of test subjects. Mice that were injected with the blood were able to show an instantaneous increase in vitality, with any previous genetic defects seeming to repair themselves. After preliminary tests were concluded, the scientists had moved on to conducting experiments on chimps that had cancer as well as a variety of other ailments including Alzheimer and Huntington's Disease. The team was surprised that in every instance where the blood was introduced into a patient, it was able to completely remove the ailment after just several hours of incubation. Follow-up tests showed that not only had the cancer cells been removed, but any tissue within the area that had sustained damaged from prior treatments had been restored to a healthy state.
Endless Path : Infinite Cosmos
Anime & Comics · Einlion
Brian_Hanes_11712 days ago
Commented
You write many big paragraphs. It makes for a smoother and easier read if you start breaking them up.
As test after test were performed and media coverage of the event began to spread globally, all news of the child suddenly ceased overnight. In an outrage at the spontaneous lack of news, people began to gather en mass around the hospital in an effort to pressure the staff into disclosing what had happened. After several days, an official statement was made by the hospital administration saying that the child had been moved to a more secure facility where he would receive care from the best scientific minds in America until they were able to verify if the child's physiology was a threat to normal people. The crowd, further incensed by the turn of events began to rally together claiming that the government was hiding away the child to hide an undisclosed truth. Some more radical groups even claimed that the child was an alien, and the government kidnapped him to dissect and analyze his body in some secret underground lab in the middle of a desert.
Endless Path : Infinite Cosmos
Anime & Comics · Einlion
Brian_Hanes_11712 days ago
Posted
The writing is gripping at points but needs work at others. Updates are regular. Story develops fine and the characters are made fairly well but could use more description. The world background is beyond par. I invite the author and whoever else is interested to check out Avatar: The Vindicated Avenger.
A Nascent Kaleidoscope.
Anime & Comics · AStoryForOne
Brian_Hanes_11712 days ago
Commented
Strong start
I was in the middle of class when I couldn't help but just stare at the ceiling. People talking around me, I heard my teacher lecture about something irrelevant, but my mind was completely unfocused. Even as everyone got up and left, I was still stuck in a daze.
A Nascent Kaleidoscope.
Anime & Comics · AStoryForOne
Brian_Hanes_11712 days ago
Posted
The writing grammar is on-point. Updates are consistent, story develops well, characters are nicely fleshed out, world background is awesome, I give it 5 stars which I don't do often. I welcome the author to look at my story Avatar: The Vindicated Avenger.
My Hero Academia: Izuku Reloaded
Anime & Comics · WisteriaNovels
Brian_Hanes_11712 days ago
Commented
The description is elite, I can already tell.
I plummeted through an endless abyss, my mind reeling as fragments of memory flashed by like shards of broken glass. The darkness pressed in, heavy and oppressive. I'd been here before - or somewhere like it. Death had a familiar stench.
My Hero Academia: Izuku Reloaded
Anime & Comics · WisteriaNovels
Brian_Hanes_11712 days ago
Posted
The writing of this tale is decent. Updates are regular, story is developed awesomely, and I can tell a lot of thought is put into the lore of this story. I'd like to see a little more investment in description of character thoughts, appearances, and motives. Dear author, I welcome you to look at my story, Avatar: The Vindicated Avenger. Cheers!
Naruto: Copy System
Anime & Comics · DragonnX
Brian_Hanes_11712 days ago
Posted
The writing quality could use some grammatical work, but the updates are consistent, the story develops well, the characters are made awesomely, and the background is amazing. I'm not kidding when I say this is one of my favorite Webnovels. This story is super fun, I'm definitely adding it to my collections. Dear author, please check out my story Avatar: The Vindicated Avenger. It is gasping for reviews.
The Eminence of a True Monarch of the Shadows
Anime & Comics · Shadow_D_Monarch3

Avatar: Kanna's Marvelous Adventures

This is a fan spinoff of the Avatar: The Last Airbender series and is the fourth installment of the Avatar: Macai's Journey universe. Several years after the Hundred Year War, Kanna Foloki is on a quest to find herself and discover her new role in the world as she takes on the role of being a proxy for the Fire Nation Intel Department.

Brian_Hanes_117 · Anime & Comics

Not enough ratings

9 Chs

Avatar: The Vindicated Avenger

This is the third installment of the Avatar: Macai's Journey series. After being ambushed by Water Tribe forces, Kett has been captured and will directly come to battle with his own values as he is held in bondage.

Brian_Hanes_117 · Anime & Comics

Not enough ratings

25 Chs

Avatar: The Vindicated Avenger

An epic eastern adventure with mysterious escapades and battles.

Star Wars vs Halo

Two iconic universes come to clash as a Covenant excavation force activates a Forerunner construct which leads to a new universe. Subsequently, a Galactic Empire unit tinkers with a Celestial device to create a wormhole into a new dimension. The Rebel Alliance and UNSC quickly follow their enemies into the new land and soon fleets from the four groups find themselves stuck in a new land.

Brian_Hanes_117 · Video Games

Not enough ratings

4 Chs

Avatar: Lingering Tensions

This is the highly anticipated sequel to the Avatar: Macai's Journey series. As the world looms in peace, bitter members of the Fire Nation Remnant embark on a quest of revenge.

Brian_Hanes_117 · Anime & Comics

4.7

26 Chs

Avatar: Macai's Journey

This is a fanon spin-off of the Avatar: The Last Airbender series. Macai's Journey takes readers deeper into the world of the Fire Nation as they explore the legendary life of Macai, a young gifted firebender. This is a great treat for Avatar fans, Eastern fans, and it's a good introduction into the franchise. Note: Unofficial music soundtracks have been added to chapters.

Brian_Hanes_117 · Anime & Comics

4.8

77 Chs

Star Wars: Phantom Alliance

The Siege of Mandalore has begun and Ahsoka is given an offer to transform her destiny by Darth Maul.

Brian_Hanes_117 · Movies

Not enough ratings

5 Chs