I’m changing my previous review of 3 stars to five after reading every chapter available so far. This is quite a good story, and the writing draws you in at every angle. I must admit, the beginning chapters were lackluster, but as time went on the quality improved exponentially. For those who are skeptical on whether or not to read this, be patient. The story gets better. Congratulations author, I’m a difficult person to please. Your novel is a work of art.

One of the best fast pacing story. The beginning of the story seem lagging and naive MC is not my taste. But I’m really surprised by how author turned the plot and developed MC. Definitely worthy of time.

This story is very enjoyable to me. I like the descriptions and the differences between most of the characters (good guys and bad). The world building seems pretty solid as well, so far. I am more than a third of the way in and I still get surprised in a good way on the growth and back story for the MC. I have read many novels here and this one is easily in my top 5.

Hello everyone, I hope you guys enjoy the book. As a reader I know the pain of chapter updates. But I promise you i will regularly update the book. *Bonus chapter will be awarded for reaching Power Stones target and Gifts. *No NTR, *Plenty of face-slapping, funking beautiful girls.

The world building is pretty typical for a cultivation novel. Far too many authors notes for my taste, explaining things that should be done through story telling. A plethora of grammar, missing punctuation, and errant word usage. All of which break emersion and distract the reader from the story. That said This is one of the most entertaining cultivation stories I have read to date. The characters seem to have depth, and interact with each other in a believable manner. The plot so far is moving at a decent pace. The writing quality has improved through the course of the story. Also the author doesn't use the character's "cultivation" as cheep page filler, and many writers of this kind of story bore the reader to sleep with it. I for one am looking forward to reading more of the story.

this is a very good book I'm liking all the chapters that I have read so far

I can't say enough good things about this story. It's a great read and a fun story. I had seen this book several times initially, and I hadn't picked it up, but I am glad I did. Nothing more to say than give it a try!

author in the end thea becomes the mc's wife?

I love this novel but i have an issues with a lot of authors especially the men.. who think that the MC must be surrounded by women left and right ... your book in good and i know it is tagged "harem" but come on almost every shop he goes to the women fall for him even his pet is a girl .. the only male character of significance i have met is the mall owner apart from that all other are just side characters... are you trying to tell me that you couldn't think of any male character that will join the MC on his journey except female????

Hey! I hope you’re doing well. I just wanted to say how much I admire your amazing writing talent your story really left an impression on me, and I’d love to chat with you about it. I’m a commission-based digital artist and have worked on comics with authors across different platforms. I genuinely think your story would make a fantastic comic! You can also check out my work on DeviantArt under the name VanessaWick Feel free to reach out to me on Discord: losserishere Or on Twitter: @tirtatare