I’m changing my previous review of 3 stars to five after reading every chapter available so far. This is quite a good story, and the writing draws you in at every angle. I must admit, the beginning chapters were lackluster, but as time went on the quality improved exponentially. For those who are skeptical on whether or not to read this, be patient. The story gets better. Congratulations author, I’m a difficult person to please. Your novel is a work of art.

One of the best fast pacing story. The beginning of the story seem lagging and naive MC is not my taste. But I’m really surprised by how author turned the plot and developed MC. Definitely worthy of time.

This story is very enjoyable to me. I like the descriptions and the differences between most of the characters (good guys and bad). The world building seems pretty solid as well, so far. I am more than a third of the way in and I still get surprised in a good way on the growth and back story for the MC. I have read many novels here and this one is easily in my top 5.

The world building is pretty typical for a cultivation novel. Far too many authors notes for my taste, explaining things that should be done through story telling. A plethora of grammar, missing punctuation, and errant word usage. All of which break emersion and distract the reader from the story. That said This is one of the most entertaining cultivation stories I have read to date. The characters seem to have depth, and interact with each other in a believable manner. The plot so far is moving at a decent pace. The writing quality has improved through the course of the story. Also the author doesn't use the character's "cultivation" as cheep page filler, and many writers of this kind of story bore the reader to sleep with it. I for one am looking forward to reading more of the story.

Could someone tell me if MC has improved? As far as I saw he was a simp who was humiliated every few chapters and kept calling the same woman who kicked him out and humiliated him his wife.

I don't understand why he considers Thea his fiancée or even his wife, since in the first chapter it is explained that they grew up together, but she never paid him any attention and at 18 he is kicked out of the house with the words "I would never marry a loser like you". Then, when he becomes rich, handsome and starts farming, he still considers her his wife without even an apology? I like the story, but this behavior of the protagonist makes me think about giving up reading. So far, I have read 63 chapters.

Author!! Why haven't you posted chapters in 2 days?? Is everything okay? ................................................................................................

It could easily be better is all I can say. I often times don't write reviews but the quality I have seen in this novel (at chapter 30) has compelled me to write this review. First. The grammer could be easily improved, there are times where it doesn't flow and it makes me wonder if this is a MTL of another novel. Correct the grammer and you would instantly see an increase in quality. Another area to improve upon is wording. I get what you're trying to say but the word choice throws it off. Combine it with the grammer mistakes and it makes you question if it was ever proof read. The story develops at a somewhat fast pace. A bit faster than I'd like to see but its nothing I haven't seen before. There are somethings that could have more screen time as they call it but this can be glossed over as trying to get into the meat of the story. The character design so far is ok imo. Could be more fleshed out but again this is a review at chapter 30 so take this with a grain of salt. updating stability, can't really comment on it as there are already 700 + chapters at the time of review. But updates seem stable if I look at how many ch/week. World building could be better as it kind of throws itself onto you as it appears. Would like to see it be better explained/fleshed out but that could be remedied at later chapter and I'm not there yet. This would easily get a higher score if the grammer and flow of the novel was fixed. I hope the author reads this review and implements the discussed topics in later chapter. And with this I'm clocking out

Wao, the name is so original, Kent Clark. Not at all reminds someone of red themed superhero 😅

this is a very good book I'm liking all the chapters that I have read so far