HELL_RAISER_8468

and let me clarify I am not your (hater) if I was I wouldn't have bothered to make such a large paragraph review i wanted the story to be more better then it already was so i wrote such a long review....... IF I WAS REALLY YOUR HATER THEN I WOULD HAVE NOT GOVEN SUCH A HIGH REVIEW DESPITE ALL THIS (NITPICKING) AS YOU SAY AND WOULD HAVE GIVEN IT A FALSE REVIEW LIKE ALL YOUR HATERS 😐😐😐😔😔😔😔..... AND IT WAS DISAPPOINTING TO SEE A AUTHOR QUESTIONING A READERS LOYALTY.......😭😭😡😡😡😡😡😡😡

no it was written he was on verge of collapsing how can huuu... ( hypothetically I am on the verge of collapse is it not possible someone near me to know that from the way person is breathing, sweating, and his posture..) Think about it and suddenly that same person has recovered to the point of exhaustion to a normal state..

I am sorry but i am not nitpicking but at least think why people are critising.... you wrote a good story why destroy it 😭😭.. let's just say hypothetically (YOU AM THE MC OF STORY).. so what do you think will be your first steps in unknown world find danger or about yourselves right 👍👍.. or maybe not doing anything supernatural like being on the verge of collapse and suddenly rejuvenating in front of whole audience.... i am genuinely interested in the story but improve this little bits of the story to make it more enjoyable.... IF YOU CAN THEN I PROMISE THAT I WILL GIVE 5 STARS... AND EDIT MY REVIEW AND SAY I WAS WRONG..... MSSG ME WHEN YOU ACTUALLY IMPROVE THIS HABIT SO I KNOW WHEN TO SEE THIS MASTERPIECE.........

no let me tell you AUTHOR either u cannot comprehend the situation or u are a retard that is unfazed by critisism and only fazed by fake praise... i have read upto ch 7 and i have already started hating the mc .... 1st - he wakes up in an unknown world with unknown family and no memories and what does our mc do???? ( GO TO SCHOOL) cause why not who's gonna stop him.... instead of finding about himself and his situation... 2nd- he has the option to skip school find out about himself bhut after going to school this reatd mc goes spill the beans for RAVEN instead of avoiding her... 3rd- after that he goes to pe class and does his quest ??? like what then chooses the reward it's understandable to choose (full recovery) but uses it instantly like hell it doesn't raises any question if iIwas there I would have known mc has a superpower... And where was his P.T teacher letting a student do 100 sit ups , 100 sqats , 10 kn run like what ??? why??? pls 🙏 🙏 but that's not all there more pls author think with a brain 🧠 🧠......... p.s just listen to critisism and improve your writing instead of deleting it..........

i don't know why but i scrolled through the end to die a ("HERO")!!🤝🤝

i have a crazy theory but i think shadow supreme is jack !!!! well their personality matches and I have this crazy feeling.... AUTHOR - SAN spoilers please 😞😞😞🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺..................

which character are u talking about

i seriously wasn't expecting that

damm what a plot twists