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Fatbastard03
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2024-10-12 00:13

Pretty good so far. The story has an interesting plot, could go more in depth into the relationships between characters and the personalities of the characters but it’s not bad 👍

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Haruchai
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Okay, I've read the entire 42 chapters in one sitting and I have come to the conclusion that the entire story is mostly boring and getting dragged down under its own weight. First of all, omnipotence would be amazing power. The ability to reshape things as you desire with all the blessings and curses that would entail poses an interesting question. What limits can an omnipotent god truly have? Truly, only what one imposes on ones self. In effect, the results of all your action fall under your shoulder since your power is beyond limit. This would have made for an interesting read. To see an MC struggle not because of a lack of ability to engender change, but instead having too much capacity to do so. This could be central moral dilema to shape the entire narrative in interesting ways. However, the moment omniscience was added in the MC became a monkey of fate. Knowing too much he is virtually locked into inaction. Its like creating the most powerful being then retroactively adding nerfs to balance it out. A truly annoying story style I've learned to dislike. The end result nothing interesting is happening hence a boring overall story. That said the MC is not a robot and does do a lot of impulsive actions so its not like he is under a non-interference pact or something of that sort, which I believe is the only curious thing since with having knowledge over all things he basically already knows all the effect his current action has. Writing quality is excellent. (5 star) Story development is a bit lackluster. (3 star) Character design was not too well thought out. (2 star) Update stability is not good, this may already be in hiatus at time of review. (2 star) World background is just a standard Marvel world. (3 star)

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