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Zin_Kohtun
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2024-03-17 14:47

Thanks for the Amazing and unique stories. Ilove about the MC's mom and grandparents still love him and make sense than over tragic like not only MC's father is abandoned him but also MC's mom and grandparents hate him. But now, I can relief. At first I was worries his mom is also abandoned him and the nurse is adopt him. Thanks God, MC's mom and grandparents love him. Also, I like the MC is a mixture of Eternal, Deviant and Celestial. It's explain the reasion why MC is OP . I also want to suggest MC's should travel to the DC and meet or contact with the Maxwell aka Demon( just the nickname I give him).

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Haruchai
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Okay, I've read the entire 42 chapters in one sitting and I have come to the conclusion that the entire story is mostly boring and getting dragged down under its own weight. First of all, omnipotence would be amazing power. The ability to reshape things as you desire with all the blessings and curses that would entail poses an interesting question. What limits can an omnipotent god truly have? Truly, only what one imposes on ones self. In effect, the results of all your action fall under your shoulder since your power is beyond limit. This would have made for an interesting read. To see an MC struggle not because of a lack of ability to engender change, but instead having too much capacity to do so. This could be central moral dilema to shape the entire narrative in interesting ways. However, the moment omniscience was added in the MC became a monkey of fate. Knowing too much he is virtually locked into inaction. Its like creating the most powerful being then retroactively adding nerfs to balance it out. A truly annoying story style I've learned to dislike. The end result nothing interesting is happening hence a boring overall story. That said the MC is not a robot and does do a lot of impulsive actions so its not like he is under a non-interference pact or something of that sort, which I believe is the only curious thing since with having knowledge over all things he basically already knows all the effect his current action has. Writing quality is excellent. (5 star) Story development is a bit lackluster. (3 star) Character design was not too well thought out. (2 star) Update stability is not good, this may already be in hiatus at time of review. (2 star) World background is just a standard Marvel world. (3 star)

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