The novel has an intriguing premise and raises many interesting questions. The use of multiple descriptors for the protagonist adds depth to their character. However, the writing could benefit from more concise and flowing sentences. Additionally, more description and world-building could enhance the immersive experience for the reader. Overall, the concept has potential and with some polishing, could make for a gripping and thought-provoking story.
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LIKEAlbinus_istamar:Thanks a lot for your review, i'm trying to improve mi writing skils on english i'm a spaniard, i promise that i will do my best.