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Albinus_istamar7dReplied to William_Texnot promoted but the think IS that i don't know how exacltly translate the grade "alférez"
"The issue, my precious boss Uzu, is that Second Lieutenant Eneas and Chief Engineer Colonel Prometheus are not using radio slingshots; they have taken advantage of the adaptation of the orbital engines to encode the signal as a low-level gravitational slingshot... This allows it to not be interfered with unless the main ship from which it departs is destroyed."- Albinus_istamar8dReplied to William_TexCh 2 A consciousness floating in the cosmos
- Albinus_istamar24dReplied to NM1119yy
Fixed
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Sorry mate, i don't know why is uploaded the old versión of this chapter, on a first try the name of the MC is Ikky, but i had to change it because a real hacker named Ikky wrote me a private message to change it, the i change the name for Lion
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- Albinus_istamar2mthPosted
As an author, I write this review to ask my dear readers what they liked and what they didn't about what they read about the novel. I see that many have stopped reading lately. I don't know if it was because it switched to premium, or if the plot After the sanctuary you didn't like it, tell me your opinions so I can improve and adapt the progress of the novel to your tastes.
- Albinus_istamar2mthReplied to Muzzy
What do you mean?
"Congratulations on being the first player with 10 cores of level 3 or higher in the tutorial" - Albinus_istamar2mthReplied to Muzzy
Fixed, i don't know why but this things happens in the upload version
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fixed
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sorry mis translation, equipment
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I know that it's not usual on a englishe writing style but on spanish if there are a dialog and the point or the thought has not a real clousure on the phrase we will use "..." , can you see it like a breath
I tried to ask Lion if he knew any important information about the world we were heading to, but he preferred not to say anything until the tournament was over. There was no point in insisting, so when we saw that the Scottish giant was drunk and snoring in bed, Lion and I said goodbye to go to our respective cabins... - Albinus_istamar2mthReplied to SkillsMasterAkurai
hahaha a bad mistranslation, on spanish if we fell on somthing it's that we realized something
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changed
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i thought it's more easy with this change
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jummm i have to take see how to say it in a better way
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thk,
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I prefer a girl calling me daddy than a boy with his "Hi bro..." ;)
"I... no... it's not what you think... but how was I going to propose to you..." At that moment, I realized that deep down he was still the same insecure daddy as when I met him, and decided to torment him a little...