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Review Detail of CHZ in The strongest human is a cheater

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The novel has an intriguing premise and raises many interesting questions. The use of multiple descriptors for the protagonist adds depth to their character. However, the writing could benefit from more concise and flowing sentences. Additionally, more description and world-building could enhance the immersive experience for the reader. Overall, the concept has potential and with some polishing, could make for a gripping and thought-provoking story.

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The strongest human is a cheater

Albinus_istamar

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Albinus_istamar
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Thanks a lot for your review, i'm trying to improve mi writing skils on english i'm a spaniard, i promise that i will do my best.

The_Reader5050
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There is gender mix up, for a female goblin you used he not she

CHZ
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huh?

The_Reader5050:There is gender mix up, for a female goblin you used he not she
That_Annoying_guy
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How many is in the Harem

Albinus_istamar:Thanks a lot for your review, i'm trying to improve mi writing skils on english i'm a spaniard, i promise that i will do my best.