at leat make the name of the characters consistent. its kinda hard to read. not about the grammar, more about the logic. to hard to understand

honestly speaking.. my head hurts with the changing name so frequently... the story and world is very well developed but back to start, my brain lost cells just for the name.

The translator didn't even try .. this just makes my eyes hurt with the amount of Chinese names and phrases in it

stop posting chinese trash . . . . . . . . .........................................................................................................

The most frustratingly written story I have read the author tried to be mysterious and write in a new way but it just makes the whole story overly complicated without adding anything to the plot itself the constant changes in branching story lines with no real plot direction. The premis I surmise is to explain the the prelude and world building as the MC plays a phone game he downloaded building his character he will become later int he story by clearing the game but the narration is confusing and their is no breaks or direction in the story like of each chapter he will constantly change the viewpoint of the story between different story without explanation and with so many different branching plots without an amazing memory their is no way to follow. At this point I wonder if the plot of the story ever really does properly complete or we just accept it when the author himself mentions the completion via the game system. So in conclusion good premise terrible execution if their are people who actually enjoyed this hats off to you but I see no enjoyment in this torture of a story.

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Man, it's really hard to read. I'm sorry to give such a low score, but the reading quality is even worse than low quality mtl.[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

Why so freaking philosophical??? it makes my only two brain cells hurt. but gonna give 5* since it's so freaking difficult to understand, and it should mean it's for those guys with more brain cells than me. And stop changing names. It was so bad that I sometimes have to recall who the mc is

first time reading something that make me want to read but cant understand what im reading

system and supernatural nonsense is a bad idea for cote fic as expected