The most frustratingly written story I have read the author tried to be mysterious and write in a new way but it just makes the whole story overly complicated without adding anything to the plot itself the constant changes in branching story lines with no real plot direction. The premis I surmise is to explain the the prelude and world building as the MC plays a phone game he downloaded building his character he will become later int he story by clearing the game but the narration is confusing and their is no breaks or direction in the story like of each chapter he will constantly change the viewpoint of the story between different story without explanation and with so many different branching plots without an amazing memory their is no way to follow. At this point I wonder if the plot of the story ever really does properly complete or we just accept it when the author himself mentions the completion via the game system. So in conclusion good premise terrible execution if their are people who actually enjoyed this hats off to you but I see no enjoyment in this torture of a story.
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