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Santy_Melay
Santy_MelayLv110mth
2024-05-03 23:47

I like it but the novel would have been better without all this theme of the other world, plus the system seems to be for decoration, it is of no use. And Miaomao's reaction seems surreal to me, so you wouldn't react when you found out that your boyfriend is not from this world.

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NeeekoShin
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75 Chs

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NeeekoShin
NeeekoShinAuthor

Thank you so much for your suggestions and feedback. This is my first time writing, and I also see too many plot holes in my novel. I try to write it daily, but now that I'm busy, I just write what comes to mind, and some don't make sense. I guess I bite more than I chew. But I'll do better next time. I hope that time you can review it again.

10mth
Naruto_uzumaki_7792
Naruto_uzumaki_7792Lv4

How am I supposed to react?

10mth
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KyriosDexia
KyriosDexiaLv4

I like the pacing of the story. Overall, I feel that he will be with Zhao Jinmai because of Lin Miaomiao, but the flashback in chapter 21 takes a different turn because you introduce his past girlfriend. I want to know about his relationship with his girlfriend. Is this a harem or a single female lead?

1yr

NeeekoShin
NeeekoShinAuthor

Hello, author here. I can't believe I'm still writing this novel. Because I liked the character of Lin Miaomiao, I started writing this novel. As a fan of any other series, there's a part of you that wants to change a certain part of the story so that it will make you satisfied. Many fanfiction writers feel that way, and I feel that way too. I just didn't expect that while I was writing this, the plot I had started was expanding, and I couldn't stop writing.I don't know how long this story will last, but I want to finish this novel because I also want to write an original one. Maybe there's a time when the story will feel bland and predictable, but this is a fantasy that I made to satisfy myself. But I hope the reader will find enjoyment and won't hate my story. As for those who are asking whether it's a single female lead or a harem, even I can't answer that yet. The story is still ongoing, and I may ask the readers for the best outcome of the story.I also wrote this on Fanfiction and the Wattpad platform.

1yr
prnc7762
prnc7762Lv2

The story is interesting and has a lot of potential! I hope more people will see it. I imagine Ye Bai is the actor Lin Yi, it suits him. Looking forward to more chapters [img=recommend]

1yr
Red_Tsunami
Red_TsunamiLv4

[img=update][img=recommend] this is so good

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kainratlaint
kainratlaintLv4

good story overall i'd say that i'm enjoying it more than the original show

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