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2024-05-13 18:49

A hidden gem in concept, yet a disaster in pacing. The main character becomes a powerhouse on the continent in about a dozen chapters with little to no substance in between. This is a power fantasy novel that you should only read if you are bored and have some coins to spare. It is nothing I strongly recommend.

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Captain_Spoiler
Captain_SpoilerLv13

Honest reviews are here.. [Extreme Spoiler Alert] This novel is about MC, who in previous life is a young genius, got an incurable disease, and died at a young age.. Fortunately for him, he reincarnated in otherworld where life force (like a mana) exist.. MC has been reborn in Baron's family. It seems blessing, BUT it is not that blessing.. This world is called Rion World due to a person who manages to unite the world.. But as time passed, the wars were inevitable, and the land is the started to be divided into multiple empires and kingdoms.. There are 10 great empires and more than 100 kingdoms in this world.. In the kingdom that MC born at, alone has a 200 million population showcasing how big the world is.. The power rank of this world is started as Below Limit Breaker (Open nine Prana circuit), 1st-rank Limit Breaker, 2nd-rank Limit Breaker (Guardian), 3rd-rank Limit Breaker (Master), 4th-rank Limit Breaker (Grandmaster), 5th-rank Limit Breaker (Sage) and 6th-rank Limit Breaker (Demi-God).. The weapons or items rank is started with Ordinary, Transcendent, and Divine.. I love how simple the rank given by the author.. It is so easy to remember without any complicated or ridiculous name of the rank.. There are also not many ranks or levels of the item/weapon or power rank.. If you come here due to the "fastpaced" tag, then you might misunderstand it.. It is not that fast.. Well, MC first received the system at Ch24.. MC first breakthrough into 1st-rank Limit Breakers is at Ch76.. At Ch112 (the latest chapter for non-privilege), MC is still at 1st-rank Limit Breaker.. Romance and love story? So far, not yet.. I don't see any heroines or female characters.. No romance or love story yet.. I wouldn't mind about this.. But some people might hate it.. And since the author put the tag of it, he might add it in the future.. Right now, the story is just finished in the introductory stage.. 👉🏻Hidden power [like Kyuubi (Naruto) or Nika Nika Luffy (One Piece)]?? Check✔️. 👉🏻OP MC?? Check✔️. 👉🏻Can beat and kill someone a lot higher realm/rank than himself?? Check✔️. 👉🏻Didn't reveal his secret?? Check✔️. 👉🏻Quiet System/ not talkative A.I?? Check✔️. 👉🏻Steady pace, not too fast and not too slow?? Check✔️. 👉🏻Unique Element and Laws?? Check✔️. 👉🏻Didn't Nerfing MC?? Check✔️. 👉🏻Swordsman MC?? Check✔️. 👉🏻Good archers skills?? Check✔️. 👉🏻Human race?? Check✔️. 👉🏻Powerful Family?? Beep ❌️. 👉🏻Strong Backer like his Master or his Grandfather?? Beep ❌️. 👉🏻Always kill his enemy?? Beep ❌️. Enemy managed to escape a few times?? Check✔️. 👉🏻Reaching Aura-level on any weapons?? Beep ❌️. Not yet, so far. The background story of the powerhouse and the location of the place are quite unorganised and lacking due to the high number of the kingdom and great empire.. For example, the MC family is the strongest Baron in the northern Kingdom due to his grandfather influence.. From this statement, you might think the family is strong, but as you read further, the grandfather is on 1st-rank Limit Breaker only.. As the story progresses, many powerful powerhouses come out one after another.. Sage and Demi-God are showing up one after another.. Even MC Master is only at 3rd-rank Limit Breaker.. And MC Master is the strongest swordsman in the kingdom that MC family residence.. And as MC goes from one place to another, it is hard to determine the location or kingdom or direction.. The author also has not yet divide the place like North continent’s, South continent’s, West continent’s, East continent’s and Central continent’s.. We don't know how far MC kingdom with great empire, the relationship between kingdom and great empire, how strong the kingdom and empire, the ranking of the kingdom and empire, who the strongest human, which race is exist and which race is hostile and alliance with human.. So far, there is no info about the kingdom and empire at all.. Plus, with soooo many kingdom and empires, it sure will be complicated.. That is why I quite shock that the author make hundred of kingdom and 10 great empire.. Just from these, I am sure there are too many from the Royal and the Noble, such as from Duke, Marquis, Earl, Viscount, and Baron exist in this world.. Nevertheless, I love this novel.. Well, you will never find the perfect novel where they can satisfy all ur needs and taste.. I wish the author good luck, and please don't give up.. Btw author, have you heard a story about a young man who was falling out of high school? His mother pleaded for him to take the S.A.Ts. Reluctantly, he decided to take the test. He got the results, and to his surprise, he scored 1460 out of 1600. His mother came to him and said, "I know you cheated." He swore to his mother that he didn't cheat. But something happened. He thought, maybe I am smart. So, he started to go to class. He made new friends with people who were going to class and had ambition. Because of that, he graduated high school and went to college. Ended up becoming an incredibly successful magazine entrepreneur. Twelve years after he graduated, the S.A.T board sent him a letter. The year that he took the test, 13 test scores were sent to the wrong people. He was one of those 13 people and, in fact, had scored a 740. When he was interviewed, he said, "Everybody thinks that when I got 1460, that was what changed my life." In fact, it was when I started acting like someone who got a 1460 that my entire life changed. Many of us wait for evidence of success, and the trick is you simply have to start acting in a way someone who has what you want to act. I see that the author is an open-minded person and someone who would admit ur own mistake.. Admitting mistakes allows you to learn from them. This willingness to learn and grow can lead to better decision-making in the future. It also sets a positive example and encourages yourself to continue to improve..

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