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GaZe_Zero
GaZe_ZeroLv27mth
2024-04-04 13:42

I’m being honest it’s a great idea, and authors doing great for starting out. Issue is that this just completely neither fits SCP or the Lich. Mc is freely letting the foundation nerf him, and the foundation is acting nothing like it would. The Mc is too naive and doesn’t fit the Lich persona either, I feel like it would’ve been better to have the actual lich of an evil mc fill the role. For the author you gotta remember the Lich persona when writing, and that SCP is prob the most cruel gulag ever. If they found the Lich they would lock him up until the sun blows up, and would never let any reality bender live either.

Into the SCP Universe as The Lich.

DaoistCKto8n
4.1
26 Chs

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Kyran_Ambrosius
Kyran_AmbrosiusLv14

Honestly, it’s pretty good. My only real critique with it is why is the Litch so scared he is death. He said it himself. He is the ceaseless wheel. He is entropy.

9mth

AkashicLibrary
AkashicLibraryLv1

Its joever. They giganerfed the lich to tank level. Not even city or country or world. Mfing tank level like bro thought he was gonna die from a tank shot.

9mth
Ingenious_xestial
Ingenious_xestialLv3

Hey I’m not sure if you will see this but I made you a book cover to hopefully draw more attention to your fanfic here it is also keep up the great work

8mth
Axolotl17
Axolotl17Lv3

I absolutely love this story. There aren't enough SCP fanfics around. Please don't drop this story.

9mth
MythicalFanFicGod
MythicalFanFicGodLv4

I quite liked the Fanfic. Although there was a few issues with spelling or leaving out some info that confuses the readers (though it gets better later on), but it was still really good, just a shame that we probably won't ever see anymore than this.

14d
Frizepize
FrizepizeLv13

I was expecting something else....oh well... this fanfic isnt't updating any soon, and won't ever.5 star on writing quality.2 star on story development 0/1 star on updating stability and 3 star in world background

8mth
Flint_dad
Flint_dadLv5

it's not bad but it's poorly developed the protagonist is not following the story he told them on several occasions that he was the lich but he doesn't behave like one and he didn't test his own abilities and the development of the world is weak he said he would explain his origin but he only showed an illusion that didn't say anything but on the other hand the story is well written some errors in the creation of sentences the autoe has potential but he has to learn to better develop the world, the story and the characters

8mth
exel
exelLv3

Great story I hope you don’t leave this book

8mth
James_Bondo
James_BondoLv4

really a nice story. the good guy mentality is extremly nicely done and fits into the characters plan to stay low. the world as a whole is also pretty good even thou the storys still only a few chapters long. but all in all very good

8mth
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