I have reached chapter 43 and I love the story. My favourites are the ones where mc has no regard for the plot plus he the mc is going the technological way which is new for me. I only hope that after the new York invasion, you don't falter and lose your grip on the story. I have seen most fanfics start going down hill from there. Your update schedule is unstable but I am sure you can improve with time. World background is well laid out and mc is smart and doesn't make clearly stupid mistakes. Especially after taking NZTs, you showed an amazing contrast between the mc before and after taking it BTW. It is just a shame you settled on Gwen being the heroine. I would have loved to see mc later on in the story having Wanda maximoff as his love interest. In my mind it will fit your story with the male mc specialising in technology and the female heroine specialising in magic. This contrast would have made them a good couple in a sense. P.S: author you don't need to limit your mc too tightly on technology. If you can integrate other elements into technology like magic. It could allow the mc to wall out his own path which would be awesome to see. Of course these are only my suggestions, DONT lose your grip on your own story and keep up the good work
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