Author for fun here! Of course I’m gonna rate my own novel high 😁👌 updates are consistent and I try to keep my story interesting so give it a try if you like Marvel and Sci-fi Tech

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The grammar sucks. The author uses like 2 commas per chapter, so over half of his sentences are run ons and there’s a weird use of exclamation marks. Also, it’s straight up boring so far. I would argue the mc has no personality except for wanting to survive. Half of every chapter is filled with author’s notes (also annoying), one at the top and and one at the bottom so there’s really not that much plot in 26 chapters.

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honestly MC is one of the types I dislike the most, reckless, immature, hormones controlled teenager. despite how author portray him as smart cuz of his enhancement but still IQ doesn't necessarily equal to wisdom, there a lot of situation showing how stupid he is, ranging from simple as doesn't know how his friends know his address when one of them literally go to his house once a week, suddenly want to kiss Gwen in conversation where his relationship is just a friend thinking she likes him, let the little mind rapist go without any aggression after she trying to enter his mind, gambling the chance peter have different abilities by letting different spider bit him if any per chance the compatibility between the DNA is bad he could dying bruh, and he thought it's great idea to steal all radiated spider in school tour...story development is just so so, nothing unique, he build companies with Peter and Gwen and he doing heroes thingy instead of just focusing on strengthening himself

Started reading this when harem was still a tag. Author then ”changed” his mind to just gwen. If it was just 1 leave gwen with Peter and give mc someone like natasha or felicia. They are atleast goodlooking. Gwen is so ugly to me in her halfshaved feminist hairstyle and I hate ghostspider, such a boring version of spiderman.

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Honestly this book genuinely surprised me. for starters the writing quality is the best you can get on Webnovel there are close to not mistakes at all, the story progression is good to the point where your on edge at the end of every chapter the update schedule is so good that I worry for the Authors health, the Author really makes the characters come to life and making them as realistic as they can be. The while system part is well balanced and not your generic brain dead instant OP system the MC also had a personality and its not being a degenerate who can't stop fantasizing about the girls, it's an actual character who acts and thinks like someone who was brought into another world that he knows almost everything about everything the MC does is realistic and not something stupid that an Author would claim as realistic. it's something unique and hey take it from the Critic like myself read up to CH15 and see it for yourself Honestly the Author cooked here

good so far would love to see where this goes. also please stop using bold for system speaking as the tts just skips it.

I have reached chapter 43 and I love the story. My favourites are the ones where mc has no regard for the plot plus he the mc is going the technological way which is new for me. I only hope that after the new York invasion, you don't falter and lose your grip on the story. I have seen most fanfics start going down hill from there. Your update schedule is unstable but I am sure you can improve with time. World background is well laid out and mc is smart and doesn't make clearly stupid mistakes. Especially after taking NZTs, you showed an amazing contrast between the mc before and after taking it BTW. It is just a shame you settled on Gwen being the heroine. I would have loved to see mc later on in the story having Wanda maximoff as his love interest. In my mind it will fit your story with the male mc specialising in technology and the female heroine specialising in magic. This contrast would have made them a good couple in a sense. P.S: author you don't need to limit your mc too tightly on technology. If you can integrate other elements into technology like magic. It could allow the mc to wall out his own path which would be awesome to see. Of course these are only my suggestions, DONT lose your grip on your own story and keep up the good work