Review Detail of jeanofarc in Football-Ballon d'or or die [Gacha System]

Okay, I read some chapters but for some reason, I cannot establish a clue about what your story is really about. TLDR, here are my strengths and weaknesses for your novel. Strengths: Unique genre. Good representation of the premise. Weaknesses: No knowledge of plot structure. Lack of description of what the story is all about along with scenes. I know for a fact that this novel falls under the sports genre, so I was expecting fast-paced action scenes of the players or something similar. I didn’t see any of it in the first chapter. I suggest describing the scenes (for example, describe the office’s appearance) and adding context to your chapters. When making chapters, there needs to be an objective of what you are trying to portray to the audience. You need to convince people to read your book. I tried to understand some characters, like Jeff, for example being the boss, but for some reason I cannot flip the page because I keep reading scenes without any context of what it is all about. Also, please improve your book title, so I can have a clear picture of what your book stands for. I appreciate your desire to represent the world of sports in novels, but for now I just can’t read the rest of it because of it lacking a clear foundation of what it is about. But you shouldn’t give up. Sports isn’t my thing, but knowing you want to represent it through your novel is making me want to read more. That is, if you revamp/rewrite your book. Good luck on your writing journey by the way, and feel free to message me in the forums should you have any questions.