well, I'm a newbie in writing reviews so , well, I'm just giving my pov of this ff, anyways, the mc (author) seems like a sucker for job, always pleasing the superior, and also, it seems like the mc does not have his own free will to make decisions, he only follows the tasks or superiors, like, he found out obito wanted to... employ him and straight away started working for him like it's natural, anyways, that's how the story is built and I'm just sharing how I felt. that's it, good feel though, I give it a 3.5 rating overall
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LIKEEh, this review isn't quite accurate. The MC does take the initiative often. He just pretends that he's perfectly servile. Possible spoilers below. I mean I recall him planning on eventually betraying Orochimaru before he attempts to take over his body. And he's purposefully made Danzo's life much more difficult and stressful for his own gain and amusement.